Ahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahhahahaha(takes deep breath)hahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!
Poor, poor, poor Leo!That was so funny, you are genius!
And just a little curious as to what Mikey may or may not have known at the end?
It raises many questions, none with easy simple answers.
Awesome short, very funny!

The Light Of Reason♪

Too funny - got me giggling in the middle of otherwise very serious studying; thank you for that ^w^

hahaha! This was funny! Good job!

(ROFL) Okay, I need to go take a break before reading anything else. I might die from lack of oxygen between laughs!
This is great! Do you think you'll write any more?

Amazingly funny! Great job.

Aww, poor Leo hopefully he will be able to come back from this and laugh at the whole thing. If not then at least he now knows the outcomes that assumptions will get him, especially with brother's like his.

I really liked this line "The fight was quick and useless" I don't know why but it gave me a serious case of the giggles. I guess it's because after I read it I pictured a teasing Donnie with an embarrassed Leo lounging after him to get him to shut up and then him turning his embarrased anger on Mikey for writing that it in the first place (shrugs) gotta luv the guys in these moments.

Great job

Love- love- LOVE Leo's defensiveness and reactivity. Poor baby, betrayed for once by his emotions--bwa hahah!

And our evilly adorable Mikey here:
“You-- you--” he wheezed out between loud guffaws, “You-- think it’s-- Oh, man, I’m dyin’! -- think it’s about-- you and Karai?”

I love the ambiguity that floats around the Leo/Karai question and you've captured that perfectly here-- plus giggles!

Great little story!

Cyn, I read this on Stealthy Stories and I loved it there as well as here. Great job on this. Yes, when one assumes, it turns out to be something entirely different. I still felt sorry for Leo though. Nicely done. You are a shelltastic writer.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

You can observe a lot just by watching. Heh. And remember - When you come to a fork in the road, take it. I sometimes think Yogi Berra had his tongue in cheek the whole time.

I do love when people pick on Leo and Karai. Poor Leo with his heated denial and even more heated embarrassment. I also got a kick of Splinter wanting to see the finished product, though I suspect he can see the grain of truth in the story, too.

Great way to start the day for me!

Poor Leo! Yjat mist've been really embarassing!

That was a cute little short story. Poor Leo must have been absolutely mortified.

Mind following that train of thought...Nah
Great story! My sides hurt!

*stares for a moment*...*totally cracks up laughing*
That was really great. Very funny! Good job. XD

That was so cool, I'm still laughing, oh my god, that was great, i'm going to be thinking about this for awhile, oh my god, that was so sweet, man, more, more like this, help me laugh, lol

oh crap, this had me laughing! poor leo, he blew a gasket over nothin-- well, sorta. mikey's such a little sneak!

'and the warrior she was facing off with looked like a Japanese version of Casey, only with more hair and an intelligent look on his face.' -- with an intelligent look on his face, lol!

i really liked this. i think it would take alot to get leo embarrassed but now that his bros know how upset the subject of karai and him makes him, they'll be bugging him 'til they're six feet under! good job, it was great and fun to read!