 AlsoSprachOdin 8/21/08 . chapter 1“I love the smell of lavender. Your mother has great taste. Of course the mask covered up most of the scent last night, but it still smelled wonderful.”
“Oh my god, that was you? You pervert! MATT, RUN!” |
 Winkaku 7/19/05 . chapter 4OH GODS! *sobs* THAT WAS WONDERFUL! *sobs* *yes ENDLESS sobbing!* That story kicked ass! I LOVE IT! |
 Bleu Unicorn 1/26/03 . chapter 1Since I'm here, I figured I'd comment on the other stories you've got up (that I haven't already commented on at TZ).
As I recall when I first told you I'd read this, you pulled a very me type thing and said it was terrible.
I beg to differ. I have to say I think in writing the fics you've grown, but this one is still a fun read. Though, I do think you've got Dana a bit wrong. This is more my opinion than anything. While she's definitely exhibited characteristics you've used, I don't really see her as the shallow, unweilding type. (We can discuss this on IMs, if you really want. ;))
Anyhoo...onwards and upwards... |
 Sharis 4/15/02 . chapter 1 I'm sure others have said this, but this is great! :) |
 Batkid 4/4/02 . chapter 4 This stoy was really good. liked it because it wasn't too long or too short, and the character interaction really hooked me. Loved Kendra's big mouth personality, and I hope that she'll return if you make a sequel to this story. |
 Dr Gonzo 10/27/01 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this. you really know the characters and use thm wel.l I hope you do another |
 terri 10/17/01 . chapter 1 this is so good. i enjoy this very much. i wonder what happen to kendra and bruce. did they...
nah. bruce could be her great grandfather. anyway i just want to tell the author write another one but about terry |
 Cynful456 10/11/01 . chapter 4 Hey, this was really a fun story! The grammar was good, and the storyline made for a fast read. |
 The Lady Tigress 10/10/01 . chapter 4Well, if you want the truth, I didn't think I'd ike it. I thought that I would read a few lines, and then leave 'cause it would childish or something. But it wasn't. I liked it. A lot. You've got a great way with words. Your synonims add a real life to the story. "As warm as a July sunshine and as sharp as a January wind." You've got a lot of great humor, too. I laughed out loud. So in short, good job. Not at all what I expected, and a really great suprise. I happen to like surprises. Well, anyway, be blessed, and may your imagination take you where real life can't!
Rachel, The LAdy Tiger |
 Lil'DevilBabe 10/8/01 . chapter 1this is hella good |
 All Mighty Terrestrial 10/4/01 . chapter 1Okay, that was creepy on several levels. All I can say is that this show must attract the same kinds of people. Either that, or you've been mining my brain while I sleep. |
 Toadie 10/3/01 . chapter 4Woweee...This is really really good. you captured Bruce and Terry's characters perfectly, among many others. |
 shana 9/29/01 . chapter 4 beautiful! i love the idea of having someone trying to steal terry. i also love seeing bruce acting sane. |
 Jess 9/28/01 . chapter 4 I like this story a lot. I think you should continue it and further the budding relationship. You have an awesome writing style that I dont see that often. I definetly say this is a 5 star story! |
 Silver Sunshine 9/28/01 . chapter 4Wow, what can I say? An absolutely amazing fic! I loved the reference to Gladiator, and some of Kendra's one-liners were really funny! :) Great work! |