Reviews for Time After Time

Reviews For: Time After Time

DarkBlaziken 2008-05-09 ch 1,	abusewow... i can never manage this kinda fics. i've never tried... well, sad little ending...as with all Hectorx someone fics if you follow the original plot. but your fic's a little...suggestive...well, it's T for a reason...
Yugi the Other White Meat 2008-05-04 ch 1,	abuseHahaha... I hate Hector/Farina... Mostly because it separates Farina/Dart and Hector/Lyn, but still... hahaha... Plus you killed her off in the end! She was one of my all-time favorite characters... Out of all of them, I think 017 is my favorite. XD Florina. XD
Jayden und Verwelkt 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseTHE LAST ONE. ...I'm crying right now. Really. I heart this fic. It's so good.
Maxmagnus20019 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abuseVery nice work, I really enjoyed it. Keep it up! xD
Edward Houshi 2008-03-17 ch 1,	abuseDifferent... But still really fun! Prompts are difficult, but the end result is amazing! The ending was sad, but in a good way. Stories can't all be sunshine and fluffy bunnies. I loved it.
Kitsilver 2008-03-16 ch 1,	abuseThat was so cute. I can't criticize too much here. A few sentences would have been better split in two, but you had to that for this challenge and it worked. The many small details you showed about Hector and Farina, like their mutual dislike of potatoes and Hector sneaking sweets to Farina, were endearing and sweet. I was also impressed by the by how much you were able to convey in a few words, especially "lips like summer rain" and Farina's response when Hector says money can't buy everything. Nicely done ^^. Glad to see another Hector piece from you, and with a pairing I wasn't expecting.
Aquatic-Idealist 2008-03-16 ch 1,	abuseThere have been quite a few of these lately... Maybe I should check it out. Anyways, it must have been quite a challenge, but you pulled it off very well. Congratulations and please keep up the good work! (And, yes, I couldn't seem to see anything in my first and second glances...)
Meelu the Bold 2008-03-16 ch 1,	abuseOh this was really cute. I don't really have too much crit other than sometimes some sentences struck me as almost too cute or something. I'm actually cool to this pairing but I liked the fic, so that says something about it!
Sara Jaye 2008-03-16 ch 1,	abuseksejflksdhgjkdljf I LOVE YOU~ This was beautiful and awesome and wonderful and all that good stuff. AND THAT LAST ONE T_T And the fact that you dedicated this to me? THANK YOU!

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