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Reviews For: A Winner Is You! Vincent Valentine!

Khellan Rafe
2008-07-13
ch 4,
abuseNot bad, reall good flow of events. Seems a little rushed, with a couple clarity and grammar issues, but all in all a solid entry. Lookin forward to competing against ya!
avatarjk137
2008-07-09
ch 4,
abuseGreat work. You're the first entry in, and I think this has happened before. You've got some spelling, grammar and sentence tagging issues (it was a little hard to tell where dialogue began and ended because of missing quotation marks), but the overall action was good.
Reds Owshad Dark
2008-06-29
ch 3,
abuseIt was... short. But well written. I wish there was more action though... Wolverine shouldn't have been that easy to beat.
Kohaku Kawa
2008-06-13
ch 3,
abuseNice fight scene, that was a good way to knock Logan out.
Aelsthla-Mental
2008-05-16
ch 3,
abuseWinnie the Pooh’s Hundred Acre Wood Clothes Store

loved that one...

where are the giant robots when you need them hey?

very quick, i hadn't even seen that round 2 was up when i saw your story... meh.
avatarjk137
2008-05-16
ch 3,
abuseA bit hasty, are we? You had until June 15 to send this in.
avatarjk137
2008-04-22
ch 2,
abuseI liked the cliffhanger. "Next up, Vincent battles... someone else." Good work.
Reds Owshad Dark
2008-04-22
ch 2,
abuse... Wait... Since when the hell could Vincent let rockets pass through him? Did I miss something? I mean I've played all the games with Vince in it and I don't remember anything like that being avalible.
And the flash away from the battle, hear a boom, and winner annonced thing is kinda corny. Really corny. I'm not trying to be insulting. I think you did an overall good job on this round. But next round Don't. Do. That. It lowered the value of the fic quite a bit.
Anywho I wish you good luck in the torny. See ya~
avatarjk137
2008-03-16
ch 1,
abuseGood work, but don't bother trying to put links in your author's notes, the site will shred them.
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