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| Khellan Rafe 2008-07-13 ch 4, | abuseNot bad, reall good flow of events. Seems a little rushed, with a couple clarity and grammar issues, but all in all a solid entry. Lookin forward to competing against ya! |
| avatarjk137 2008-07-09 ch 4, | abuseGreat work. You're the first entry in, and I think this has happened before. You've got some spelling, grammar and sentence tagging issues (it was a little hard to tell where dialogue began and ended because of missing quotation marks), but the overall action was good. |
| Reds Owshad Dark 2008-06-29 ch 3, | abuseIt was... short. But well written. I wish there was more action though... Wolverine shouldn't have been that easy to beat. |
| Kohaku Kawa 2008-06-13 ch 3, | abuseNice fight scene, that was a good way to knock Logan out. |
| Aelsthla-Mental 2008-05-16 ch 3, | abuseWinnie the Pooh’s Hundred Acre Wood Clothes Store loved that one... where are the giant robots when you need them hey? very quick, i hadn't even seen that round 2 was up when i saw your story... meh. |
| avatarjk137 2008-05-16 ch 3, | abuseA bit hasty, are we? You had until June 15 to send this in. |
| avatarjk137 2008-04-22 ch 2, | abuseI liked the cliffhanger. "Next up, Vincent battles... someone else." Good work. |
| Reds Owshad Dark 2008-04-22 ch 2, | abuse... Wait... Since when the hell could Vincent let rockets pass through him? Did I miss something? I mean I've played all the games with Vince in it and I don't remember anything like that being avalible. And the flash away from the battle, hear a boom, and winner annonced thing is kinda corny. Really corny. I'm not trying to be insulting. I think you did an overall good job on this round. But next round Don't. Do. That. It lowered the value of the fic quite a bit. Anywho I wish you good luck in the torny. See ya~ |
| avatarjk137 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseGood work, but don't bother trying to put links in your author's notes, the site will shred them. |