Reviews for Every Color of the Rainbow

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FireEdge 2008-07-08 ch 11,	abuseYeah, I've noticed that your recent stories have been for Rose of Versailles... I have nothing against you taking a break from FE, but as long as you don't leave us completely. Anyway, this one was really neat. The whole concept of was really intriguing and you definitely kept me guessing (as to which "waking up" really was Kent waking up). And yeah, I know exactly what you mean when you say you can see Kent having these kinds of dreams. I have a hard time imagining him having romantic dreams rather than death dreams. It's just the way he is...
FireEdge 2008-07-08 ch 10,	abuseXD Kent realizes that saying it was "his honor" isn't much better than "duty", right? I don't know, maybe it's just me, but they both feel the same. At first I didn't get HOW he came out victorious, but then I was all: "Oh, it was supposed to be DUTY." Still, it did have a certain effect, since he didn't confess his feelings and we all know that Kent's probably going to go back to "lying". It's makes you kinda sad and want to slap Kent silly. We love you, Kent.
FireEdge 2008-07-08 ch 9,	abuseOMG, I need to stop doing this to myself... WHY do I let stories pile up until I have so many to read that I don't know where to start? Anyway, I'm going to see if I can clear through (most) of your stories today... Since I'm leaving for three weeks very soon... So expect lots of reviews from yours truly! :) Anyway, NO, it was a GOOD thing that you didn't leave it at that first scene break. This is one of my favourite ones so far! So yes, I'm very glad that it went on for longer. I especially liked that one part from Lyn's perspective; where she was chastising herself for not "staying by his side". I thought that it was really interesting to REVERSE that. Since, you know, it's usually Kent who thinks like that and is all guilty about leaving her and such. Also, that last line was SO cute. XD
Talren 2008-07-04 ch 11,	abuseOkay, I admit, you got me there. I did not anticipate a triple dream sequence. Poor Kent, dreaming that he was dreaming. Wait...is that possible? I do like the scene transitions. Its like, oh it was only a dream...but then she's dead!...then she's not...but then she is!. That was a rather nice twist, and you managed to do it twice. It seams highly likely Kent would have dreams like that, considering how much he worries. That was suspenseful to say the least. A good title for this work indeed. Ah, so, you may take recess from the FE section well I supp- WAIT WHAT?! Our residential Kent/Lyn "fantard" intends on leaving? This cannot be allowed! She must be stopped with...with...uh...huh...drat, I got nothing. Ah well, I do hope you visit the section every now and then.
SpeedDemon315 2008-07-01 ch 11, anon.	abuseI concur completely; Kent is the type of man who fears failure, especially of duty to his leige. Nicely done, all the nightmares were wonderfully descriptive. I was starting to think Kent was experiencing some night terrors or that he should consider seeing a shrink to help alleviate the burden oppressing his mind lately. Thankfully, Lyn was there to set everything straight and comfort the ole angsty knight--for he sorely needs it.
Maxmagnus20019 2008-07-01 ch 11,	abuseA dream in a dream in a dream in a dream... yeah... pretty far off isn't it? XD Still, your right, these types of dreams could happen, or you could also see dreams of her with another more worthy man. Anyways, another good chapter, keep up the good work!
Sardonic Kender Smile 2008-07-01 ch 11,	abuseNo! And I was SO looking forward to an ending where she dies in his arms and it's ANOTHER dream...! Haha. Please disregard my morbid little mind. Anyways, this was as awesome as usual. Both Lyn and Kent are perfectly in character (and slappin' Sain...hahaha)...although Lyn does seem a bit forward towards the end, you never specified where in their relationship they were. So really, it might not have been strange at all. I also REALLY loved the fact that Kent interacted with people OTHER than Sain and Lyn...aka Wil and Heath. Nicely done. I had one problem as far as scenery was concerned...with all the switching from dream to dream, it was kind-of hard for me to figure out where Kent was, most of the time. He also switched places pretty darn fast...like how after talking to Wil, he's all of a sudden looking at Lyn. (I was thinking in my head, "Poor Wil...did he disappear?" But really, that's a totally minor note. And this chapter was total pwnage. It was great how Kent's attitude shifted from dream to dream...relieved to skeptical to horrified, finally reaching the stage where he was unable to distinguish dreams from reality. Haunting, but in the good way. You had better not disappear to another fandom, by the way. You're not allowed. You must stay here and keep writing KentxLyn fics FOREVER. (And since I'm a marching band section leader and command a legion of ferocious piccolo players nowadays, this law can be easily enforced xD). Toodle pip, Kender
Xirysa 2008-07-01 ch 11,	abuseDGSJGSFKLS POOR KENT. And you had me on the edge of my seat as well. MY favorite part was when he felt her heartbeat... It just made me d'aww... And the fact that Heath was in there for a moment was good too (well, for me anyway. :D) Aww... Please at least stop by the FE fics once in a while. I'd love to read stuff in this new fandom of yours as well, but... Oh whatever. I'm looking forward to the next one. Anger lol. [Xirysa]
RZX 2008-06-20 ch 10,	abusehey another great chapter, your portrayal of kent always seems right on. now i don't know if you've done it in any of your fics/chapters yet, but i think you've done mainly kent's POV. I was wondering if you could do a chapter or fic entirely in Lyn's view. That'd be neat. Otherwise, keep up the good work!
Talren 2008-06-12 ch 10,	abuse#10 eh? 1/10 of the way to 100! Ah, the conflict poor Kent feels. You have a flawless characterization of him, as expected. The beginning was especially nice. Kent not wanting to lie to his liege, but feels if he told the truth it would be worse. So he continues to lie against his conscience which only makes matters worse and which he blames himself for. At least he managed to make a small crack in the ice at the end. Great work! Looking foward to the next story.
Ryuuie Mizishi 2008-06-11 ch 10,	abuseOnce again, I loved it. Agonizingly cute would be a good way to put it, but not in the bad way. Definitely in the good way that makes your heart turn to mush. xD
Edward Houshi 2008-06-09 ch 10,	abuseKent seems to be even more masochistic than usual... He does beat himself up quite a bit, doesn't he? Great chapter, by the way.
Umbrielle 2008-06-09 ch 10,	abuseI think that portrayed their relationship really well. Kent's insecurity and Lyn's reaction seem to fit together very well. I think I'm starting to like this pairing more :)
SpeedDemon315 2008-06-09 ch 10,	abuseSounds like the Kent we all know. Quite typical of him, believing he is undeserving of Lyn when in reality she doesn't want better, she wants him. Well, I'll be keeping my eyes open for the next update, I'm really enjoying this.
Xirysa 2008-06-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou know... I think I've already reviewed this before... Oh well. :) It was very touching... I think that if you had made it a loop, the fic itself would have still had a very powerful affect on the reader. Or maybe I'm being too analytical... Kind glad that the "loop" was broken, though. Very nice. This is probably one of my favorite fics in the whole Fire Emblem archive. Yay. Kent, being the sexy beast he is, seems even more so with his angst. Angst makes everything sexy. Lol.

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