continue please.

cool this looks interesting

looking foward towards your next chapter

Please continue! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!

I've actually read that poem. It's very fitting to the situation. I'd like to know why he was torn up like that, and the chapter was wonderful and bittersweet.

Oh, I like this chapter. No one's ever shown the actual birth of Baron before, although fringeperson's done a scene close to afterwards. I love how much detail and effort you put into this. Great job!

It's sad and terrible, but somehow beautiful. That was a terrible time for Japan. This is an interesting one-shot.

Good work.