does this continue because I think that it should it's very good

i'm so glad you wrote this! i was thinking the exact same thing. i never really imagined the slowing process affect on his age, but i had thought at least his ghost side wouldn't age. never really thought about it beyond that... great little piece. i love it. :)

That is sad but wonderful, too!

Very sweet- good job.

How sad! Oh gosh, how sad! That was really depressing, but yet again, still good. You're rigth, I didn;t realzie that he wouldn't... oh!

Poor Jazz! She didn't live very long, and she was brilliant!

I feel like my heart is going to burst from sorrow! But that was beautiful.

OMG! I am like seriously crying! *sob* Awsome story you should be a writer of actual books and get them published becuse wow! *sob* You realy know how to put feeling into it! OH MAN! I didn't realize what time it is I should go to bed. Great story!

PS In case your wondering... it's 2:37 AM! Ah!

That was an interesting story. It's possible that Danny might not grow old at the same rate as a normal person. I still had the shivers when you wrote that Danny and Sam got together after all. It was sweet. This is a great story.

WOW. I really liked that, and I never actually thought of that possibility, but now that I read this, it makes total sence. Cool!

Lisa

This almost made me cry, but it was an amazing point to ponder. Thank you for this enjoyable piece.

Beautiful.

I cried while reading this. So artfully written and it is a great idea.

I really enjoyed it (even though I cried.)

Lo Lo.

Sad, in a way, but beautifully written.

This is just one of many things few people take time to think about-good story.

I'm kind of shocked it flowed so well-what with all the 'deaths', but it worked. I think you are one of the few people who wrote that children do not become ghostly-longer lived sure, but powers, no.

Aww... This is one of those things we don't usually think about. This is pointed, and one of those things that makes one reflect.

Danny is a half-ghost, which also makes him half-human. When he is ready, he will have a good home "beyond the Ghost Zone." But dying is a difficult part of living, and not something to be borne lightly. When it happens, it will happen. And not before.

Thank you for giving us a poignant thought to reflect over.

Sincerely,

Miriam