I love this! I smiled thinking of Joe sitting there getting all nervous tryig to drink a 'frapawhatever' lol. Good chapter!

Great chapter!Cannot wait for you to update!

I really REALLY love the way your writing Joe (Billy's brother.) You've added your own special touch! Fabulous touch.

-Ally

P.S. Your welcome for the constructive criticism. XP

I really like this story and hope you continue with it soon.
Oh I love Joe, and there are no bar this story(that ive seen anyway)DS storys centered around Joe so I beg you to continue.

This is good! I'm intrested in who the mystery girl is and I love the last few lines of this chapter!

lol lovely

Great beginning to your story. I also like how protective Joe is of his mysterious girl. I'm a Billy fan so I'm hoping you'll write an OC for Billy. *puppy dog eyes* Keep up the great work!

-Ally

"Any specific piece of ass?"
"Not the skirt?"

Love it, the bickering between them is cute. Interested to see where this goes.