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| Crystal Peak 2008-07-17 ch 2,  | abuseA very interesting story. The gauntlets were pretty cool. I Have some questions though. Firstly, shouldn't you call them by their names like Fizz, Burn and Loogie or those were nicknames of theirs. And secondly, isn't Deets hair pink? Please relpy and update your story soon. |
| Mystica234 2008-04-21 ch 2, | abuseNice chapter. ^_^ PS: Hope to see the picture soon. |
| Davescifi 2008-04-21 ch 2, | abuseGood chapter. I like the new gear though I have a hard time seeing Ed, Burn, and Loogie with ear piercings. On another note, Deets/Sarah should know that Fizz/Frances is a tomboy for life and nothing will change that much. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Skandragon Blackheart 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseI love it, update soon. |
| Mystica234 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseNice story so far. Please continue. |
| Davescifi 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseGood start and can't wait to read more. |