 Hayate 4/21/12 . chapter 2 The only thing I found strange was that Kanda's hands were smooth. He uses his sword so much they should be rough and calist. |
 ILOVEANIME123 2/5/12 . chapter 5Please write more!
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 Kuroi Yuki 13 12/27/10 . chapter 5I really like the story, but why are the quotation marks arrows? |
 omgitskirby 8/31/10 . chapter 5EGAD this story is awesome, please update soon! :] |
 Hesunohana 10/29/09 . chapter 5 a very good beginning ! the found the Innocence, what will happen ? |
 AmarantineOct.3'11 8/18/09 . chapter 5NU! i really NEED to know what happens! oh no! will they think allens dangerous since his arms obviously going to turn into a CLAW for gods sake! i mean i would be freaked out! oh by the way what innocence does he have? his claw or crowned clown? |
 Azrak 6/10/09 . chapter 5 More I must have MORE! |
 Memory 6/1/09 . chapter 4 Woah! Great story! Please update! |
 chaos key 5/25/09 . chapter 5WAow!
That's something!
I love your story!
I hope the next chapter will be up soon!
Thanks for the good story! |
 A 5/23/09 . chapter 5 I don't know if I can agree with your characterization of Allen. He is portrayed as a naive, clueless boy who isn't able to survive on his own. Which is definitely not the case.
Allen is able to get along and talk with various kinds of people and it isn't often that he is tongue-tied. Allen can also fight.
I think your fanfiction has a lot of potential but your Allen kind of ruins it for me. |
 Whiteinu1 5/22/09 . chapter 5keep going - |
 olivia-yuymaxwell 5/22/09 . chapter 5though lack of yullen but this chapter is still interesting :D
and i'm hoping more for the upcoming ones too :D
Viva yullen _ |
 blahrius 5/21/09 . chapter 5 Gah, yay for a long chapter! Please update soon! |
 SilentKiller1 5/20/09 . chapter 5oh boy i would have ran after them |
 Black Alice Butterfly 5/20/09 . chapter 5now this..IS AWESOME!
please update...i'll give you a cookie if u do.. |