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Reviews for: Remembering Sunday
ranDUMM
2009-01-30 . chapter 1
Hey,
Twas too sad. I loved how you incorporated the past and present and the song. Leslie sounds a bit like me! (I mean apart from Sirius loving her...)
ranDUMM
I'd rather live in books.
2008-03-16 . chapter 1
Sad. I feel bad for Sirius, he lost the woman he loved. I like how you explained what happened to her at the end of the story.
T. K. Ryder
2008-03-16 . chapter 1
...Hypocrite.

But anyway, other than the blatant and damn near nonstop hypocrisy that this story is very close to DRENCHED in, it was good.

Well written and what not.

Also, you managed to make it quite sad in such a short story, I'm impressed. Also, I love the ending

"I guess I'll go home now." - Bwahaha, lovely.
Lynn Carr
2008-03-16 . chapter 1
I like it a lot. Its very good. Very sad. Terribly sad. And yet. So sweet. I love it.
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