 T. K. Ryder 2008-03-16 . chapter 1...Hypocrite.
But anyway, other than the blatant and damn near nonstop hypocrisy that this story is very close to DRENCHED in, it was good.
Well written and what not.
Also, you managed to make it quite sad in such a short story, I'm impressed. Also, I love the ending
"I guess I'll go home now." - Bwahaha, lovely. |