Wow, great story! I bet your wife is honored by this! It's extremely well written too, so suffice to say, it's amazing! Awesome job!

Great piece. I like how you contrast the coldness of Tomoe's stiff corpse and the warmth of Kenji's live, wriggly body.

Aw... Very sweet! Keep it up!

Ari chan

Hey baby ,

thank you for my lovely gift fic you wrote! You know, your stories are very dear to my heart, expecially since thats the way we met. I love this kenshin story , you always are able to give voice to his thoughts so very well. I love you VERY much my love , now and always.

Your InuSkye

This story was so sweet. I loved it even more knowing that you wrote it for your wife.
I can totally see Kenshin remembering what happened that day and comparing it to his new life in this manner. Excellent work.