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| Union98 2008-09-21 ch 3,  | abuseAhh, read the sequel to the sequel first and now on the presequel of the sequel or should that be back to the future? Anyway, enjoying very much. I'm on chapter and three and still ticking. . . |
| obsidianj 2008-08-13 ch 10, | abuseThat was a very satisfying ending. I loved it that Garibaldi dragged John into this dreamworld, too. And the last line was just perfect. |
| musicin68 2008-07-24 ch 10, | abuseFantastic! I loved every minute...and read the whole thing straight through. Thank you so much for your wonderful story. I hope that my efforts are even half as good as yours and I look forward to reading more in the future. :) |
| musicin68 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseOkay, I read a lot of fan fiction. I enjoy a good portion of it. But rarely am I ever blown out of the water. This is truly some of the best stuff I have ever read. And I've only read chapter 1. It is a great take on some favorite characters in a new setting. It's hilarious and you write the noir style extremely well. I could easily see this being turned into a B5 comic. I've got to go finish the story now! Thanks so much for sharing! |
| Jennifer Cannon 2008-06-05 ch 10, | abuseFantastic ending-just sorry that it took me so long to review. I loved the dream that John Sheridan has at the end. Thanks so much for writing this and I hope to see more stories from you soon :) Jennifer |
| Ven'K 2008-05-31 ch 10, anon. | abuseJust passing through when I saw this story ... VERY GOOD PLOT! Thanks for sharing |
| Ayame007 2008-05-30 ch 10, | abuseExcellent work! A real jewel! Hilarious as well as tense, you had me riding a rollercoaster all the while Laurie. Good job! |
| Ayame007 2008-05-29 ch 8, | abuseOh the plot thickens! Nice to see it's all coming together! *moving on to next chapter!* |
| fmlyhntr 2008-05-27 ch 10, | abuseI thoroughly enjoyed this. Keep up the good work. A lovely dream (nightmare?) for Michael. Christina |
| Jennifer Cannon 2008-05-27 ch 8, | abuseThe plot thickens-can't wait to see how this all turns out. Loved the little moment between Delenn and Sheridan too. Write more soon :) |
| obsidianj 2008-05-23 ch 8, | abuseOkay, I have to go back and see where you hid the clues to Garibaldi's revelation. It's too long ago that I read the early chapters. I love the twists and turns this story takes. And the language is just too cute ;-). |
| lkevelvet 2008-05-23 ch 8, anon. | abuseThe dynamic duo solves the case in a coffee shop! What a treat - I'm waiting on pins and needles for the great reveal. Thanks for sharing and hurry back please. :) |
| Jennifer Cannon 2008-05-17 ch 7, | abuseGets better and better-this was my favorite passage : Vocabulary,’ I enunciated clearly, ‘it means the range of words that you know and can use and in your case it’s very limited. Limited. That means you don’t know that many words – you following this, Mack?’ Thanks for sharing this and write more soon :) -Jennifer |
| Ayame007 2008-05-15 ch 7, | abuseLove it! Excellent work on Nero and Maya's discussion! Gold! On to the next chapter, Olé :-) |
| lkevelvet 2008-05-13 ch 7, anon. | abuseAw, another good chapter. I loved the last scene, 'They were either side of the window, facing each other and then they weren’t two figures anymore, just the one, all blurred together and they stayed that way for a good while.' That's John and Delenn all the way. Thank goodness for Garibaldi's inquisitive nature. ;) |