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| KnightRayne25 2008-03-18 ch 1,  | abuseOh, I like it. I'm kind of fond of Mai and would like to see her in more stories where she isn't painted as evil. I really hope there is more coming. |
| Ardala91 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseMai is such a usually hated character with no good reason! She's actually a great character in my opinion. Thanks for writing a great story about her! |
| Sangi 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. |
| Wishing Only Wounds The Hea... 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. You made a few spelling/grammar mistakes, but not enough to take away from the actual story. A glance at Mai's life with the smallest dash of implied Maiko. I liked it. |
| mramirez1991 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abusethat was ok. u might this over again in one paragraph u spelled avatar wrong. |