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| hpjedi1 2008-07-19 ch 4, anon. | abuseGreat work^_^ I love Ebon Hawk crews go looking for Revan stories, especially when they are done well, like this one and a couple others I've read^_^ ~hpjedi1 |
| hpjedi1 2008-06-01 ch 3, anon. | abuseGreat Job^_^ I can't wait for the next one, Keep up the great work:3 ~hpjedi1 |
| Sarcasm Turtle 2008-06-01 ch 3, | abuseHey, I love this story so far. It's really interesting and original as far as plot goes and of course, I love Atton. By the way, I basically love your Exile's name. Vatani is like the prettiest name I've ever heard! Keep going please, it's great so far! :) |
| Promised Flower 2008-04-18 ch 2, | abuseGood beginning chapters to your story! I can't wait to see where Revan is (it seems everyone's always looking for her, doesn't it?). Where did you come with with the name "Vatani" for the Exile? I like it a lot. Oh, I'm also really happy you put Atton in the story. I've read too many stories with the Exile in them where Atton is either dead or vanished into thin air. Good work! |
| Nykali 2008-03-31 ch 2, | abuseAbsolutely spectacular! I can't wait for the third chapter. Keep all of that hard work coming! I'll be an avid reader from now on! |
| Lilliwyn 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuselol, thanks for pointing that out to me! :) |
| MelRedux 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseo I like it!! Its a great start, and you have me wanting more! I hope you do update soon. Poor Rev! Poor Carth!! One itty bitty criticism, its Revan, not Reven :) |