Whoa!

Amazing. Great job. ^^

Aw... He's so adorable when he's furious and worried!

Very well done!
A very professional style.
This was good.

I liked this fic, I really like that you also included what Jasper and Emmett did.

*claps* Wonderful, Absolutely wonderful!

I really enjoyed this from Edwards POV you did a great job capturing his pain for thinking he couldn't save her. Well done! :0)

Oh, this is fabulous. I love it!

Very good job. You portrayed Edward well. No easy feat, either...

So good! I really like how you filled in the missing parts of action that occured while Bella was out of it. Jasper and Emmett would have had fun stalking James and tearing him apart. Very, very nice!

SSVD

Wow, that was great! You're really good with Edward's point of view!

I really liked your story. I can't wiat to read more.

Loved it.

Honestly.

Truely.

=D