"some lecture by Mustang on how women you thought you knew would knock you off your feet under the moon." Mustang WOULD say that. I can see him getting all serious, just for a moment, long enough to say that aloud to Edward. Probably thinking of Riza or something, bwahaha...

And then Ed blaming the moon for all the emotion between them, hahaha. That's just like Ed. This is fun to read; I haven't read anything FMA in such a long time. (You're making me want to write Roy/Riza.)

This was great. I think you got across what you wanted to. I don't read much of this pairing, but I think you did a nice job. :)

These are the best couple on fma! Yay!

Loved it!
Please update soon!

This is really good, if she only knew.
Wonderful chapter!

This was different than a lot of the FMA Ed/Win fics I read. I like the descriptions and Ed's fatalistic approach to it all. Very nicely done.

Aw, how sad...