come on, you said you would update the next week but its been over a month now
please update soon!! i want to see how this ends...

No! You gotta update now!

niiccee..UPDATE! *Waits impatiently*

This is a good story. Please go further on with it!
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Yay for tomorrows chapter! I wish she'd just tell him. Or make Hao tell him! AND UPDATE!

can't wait for your update, man he's such a jerk!. >.< how can he love that that...$^%#@%$. Anywyas I just hope that he figures out his feelings and soon!. Oh well at least she got Hao, I guess. anyways can't wati for your update tomorrow

Hm okay now I have questions.
1. ddoes he even care?
2. was that part of the plan?
3. Does he really love her?
4. Why didn't he say that before she went to the dark side?
Anywys can't wati for your update tomorrow!. oH yeah can you plz maybe make it a little longer next time? But it's still good!

wow...now THATS THE QUICK I'M TALKING ABOUT! UPDATE AGAIN!

Since that was a fast update, I forgive you.



...Brilliant job btw! I wanna see how it ends!

that was soo awesome!

are they going to meet in the next chapter!. I hope so!. plz update early tomorrow! I want to read it! I want them to meet! plz update!

Omg you have to continue!

That is good, I just want to know what Yoh feels now, but still I can't wati for you to update really soon! plz do, like really really really soon!