o very nice.
for some reason I always get upset when reading KuroxReal!Fai
It feels like Kuro is cheating on Fai somehow xD

thats so cute I would love to see more Kuro/fai (the original Fai I just can get used to him being called Yuui) pics!! There adorable adn I think he would be serious and shy.

I wish i knew Yuui... T_T waai!

that was so sweet!

nice

Interesting!
Finally, something original!
It was a really good story, but I'm a bit confused as to whether or not Fai and Kurogane were actually going out or not.
Hm.
Because if they were, did that mean that Kurogane was cheating on Fai with his twin?
;O
Bad Kuro-woof! xDD
Oh, & I loved the name of the story. Homonym xD
Got some serious laughs outta me. Anyway, awesome story~!

Oh! I loved it! Nice and different! I'd like a 2nd chapter!! ^__^