WOW! WOW! WOW! This is the MOST romantic and powerful and beautiful poem I have EVER READ. You made me cry for real. My God you have a way of bringing your readers, cringing and shaking and weeping, into the pale light of your imagination. I actually felt the sorrow and the loss and the love and the passion while I was reading this. He's so beautiful, and Rana was so beautiful, and Sabaa is such a gorgeous name. I wanted her to die so that she could stay there forever with him in the tomb and never leave his side again. They BELONG together for all eternity, not seperated by time and space and death! Oh wow I need to go lie down now. You are AMAZING!

This is your finest work to date, dear Piscean Rubble! You brought up the hair all over my body, made my eyes sting and my mouth drop open. I read, then read again, then read again. The words filled me to the point of bursting with an emotion that I don't think we even have a name for. Longing, maybe. No, that's not it. Something deeper. Something almost Sacred. I feel almost reborn in your poetry. You are a Muse. I will never look at a tomb in the same way again. And I will never look at you in the same way, either. Transcendant, my dear.