OH MY GOD! THAT WAS FUCKING AMAZING! I am now addicted to the song haha. My review is sooo late but I've been busy but yea I run through my school halls singing the song an have made most if the teachers blush XD supprisingly I haven't got written up so WE'RE GOOD! Great job hahahaha

ahahahahahah xD Near pwned Matt xDD Poor Mattie must be SO confused

awwww

wuv it

AHHHH!

I haven't read a good lemon in such a long time!

Damn!

You got some mad lemon skill

I love the imagery, the pairing, everything.

:D

I'm so happy!

wow...cant...speak...can..only...squeal and laugh...hysterically...

i cannot communicate how much i loved this! i think this is how NxM is supposed to be...kawaii and fluff, but passionate and amazingly sexy at the same time! btw, maybe spacing in between song lyrics/story?

thank you! i have to go freak out now... XD

I think you should put this under comedy as well...tough tities had me lmfao. oh and matt was hysterical.

Mello:“Bye Matt! Kill the freaky Mario-haters, mushroom-things!”

Matt: Matt sighed deeply. Mello really didn’t know shit about Mario.

This was the funniest thing i've read in a long time

really a good story...

I listened to the song while reading this...my new favorite song I give this 10 out of 10 now if you excuse me I have to try and stop this nosebleed...

KYAA! KAWAIINESS! I LOVE THE FLUFF! SEQUEL! ja ne! PLEASE UPDATE! ASAP!

THAT WAS BEYOND KAWAII! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! ja ne! PLEASE UPDATE! ASAP!

Hehe. I shouldn't have said what i did in my last review! I'm sorry. You fixed it! It was even hotter this time! Exactly what the doctor ordered! I would really like to see more from you, so I shall go off and look. XD You are a really wonderful writer. Keep up the good work!

Well, I dunno if their minds were blown, but mine definatly was! Amazing job! I needed that! XD Feels so good to read a hott, steamy, spicy lemon when I myself am in a slump of the sexual (writing) sorts. Keep up teh amazing ork and I'm glad you did make a second chapter! I am off as soon as I give you a slight few words of advice. Don't mind me, the perfectionist. You can just tell me to go to hell if you want. But, maybe, change the poaragraph in a song fic whenevr you have a new line? I dunno about the rest of teh world but I get so lost in teh middle of huge long paragraphs! XD! And, maybe, have a different paragraph whenever someone new talks? Don't take it the wrong way, I loved it! I just ... am very picky! XD! Amazing work!

Shower scene? Dude! Who's complaining xD

Honestly, my love for MelloNear has grown because of this 8D

OMFG. Thats all I can say. You have made so many wet fantasies come true in one fanfic. I read chapter too and once again. OMFG. You have to continue! If you cant think of anything, theres always that jealous gamer who could stir somehting up! I lovew how you did this though. Absolute sexiness but with enough passion to even it out.

...Raccon

lieks

to watch.

...

...:D

Oh, that was brilliant. Absolutely BRILLIANT.

...Raccoon's a perv.

XD sry