Loliver goodness! Yay! hav 2 agree with Oliver that April Fools Day IS the worst. lol

First and foremost, I apologize. I tried to click on review, and forgot the new addition of the review button. I clicked add to favorites by accident, and I'm sorry. I removed it, but that's not to say that your story wasn't good.

It's very original- the first Saint Patrick's day fanfic I've ever seen here.

I thought that it was fairly in character. "As luckless and as Lilly-like as ever" really sounded like something that Lilly would say- I could picture it.

I enjoyed how her thoughts were interrupted by the pinching -.

Yes, it was cute and I liked it. But... I don't know. It needs more to it. And I don't mean another chapter, nor a paragraph on how Lilly is in love with him (that second one happens way too often in fanfics, heh). Just went by too fast for me, you know?

Overall, good job.

Yes, exceptionally cheesy and short, but not pointless at all. I liked it a lot!

They weren't that OOC. I guess sort of, kind of, in a way, but not really. I did think you should've given it more of a back story, before the kiss happened, because it seemed really sudden. Not that it didn't make any sense, though

Nice cute little story, though I believe it's public displays of affection, not personal.

u reversed their roles u know. usually miley and lilly are the ones huting oliver!

AW! I loved it! I have never noticed a single St. Patrick's Day fanfiction for Loliver! This may be the first!

aww! That was so cheesy but i loved it! Omg, i totally forgot about the pinching. I DON'T OWN GREEN! (except for a jacket...) Thank God for color of the month braces! lol. great story! They were quite in character for you being away for so long. good job!

wow. that was like a cheez-it covered in cheese whiz.

:) j'adore, Katie.

Love,

Caitlin

Aw! That was so adorable! C: I loved it!

I didn't Lily & Oliver were OOC AT ALL, in fact you did an absolutely GREAT job for being gone from the Loliver world so long! :D

Me very happy! C:

Fave line:

“Eighteen years old and the only comeback you have is you're mean?”

Lolz. Nice. c:

Loves,

Jul!*

cute

THIS WAS AWESOME! ;P

That was pretty cheesy, but, the irony, and the pinching, and all the other things made it balanced. So in the end I give ou an A !

It was chessy but, i loved it!

Aw...not gonna lie, it's adorable! I'd agree though, a bit OOC. But still, I like it.

Maybe it's just me, but it vaguely reminds me of Twilight...

Kiowa