baww i loved this ! for real ! im also writing a hogans heroes slash story with them two and wow i really liked that 3

I can't remember if I've left feedback on this story before, but I just wanted to drop a note because I've come back to it again and it never fails to put a smile on my face. Your descriptions are wonderful (Carter doesn't have a strong jaw, but he can try!) and the characterizations lovely. Simply one of my favorite HH pieces. Thanks for sharing it.

Would you write another one? Please? I like Newkirk/Carter pairing...You dont see enough of it Really good. I like it

i really like it and i really hope there will be more chapters please!

I really envy you. I love when people get pissed off at me for writing things they don't agree with. -Sulks-

But besides that, there is only pure love for this fic. I love Newkirk slash. -don't ask why- And of course, Hogan/Klink, that's just a given. If there was any fiction for it, I might have made it my OTP. But there's not. So it's not. -duh-

Hey, if ya' feel like making more Hogan Heroes Slash, give me a ring! -E-mail-wise of course- I'm only asking 'cause, I don't come here enough to see if you do.

*dies and goes to slash heaven*

The only thing wrong with this story was all the schmucks reviewing it and saying it was horrible. Because this was the best Hogan's Heroes slash I've ever read. Not that I've ever read any besides this. Heh. Anyway, I praise you to the max for this story. It's goin' on my favorites, and you should totally write some more HH slash. Don't listen to all these other idiots who think that this sucked.

I loved it!

OMG!1

HH slash! huzzah.

it is always good to find obscure slash. it's like finding money in your wallet that you did not know was there. :-P

contraty to popular opinion i think the world is slightly short on Hogan/Klink innuendo. so... thanks? :-)

well, anyway, i just wanted to give you some support. it always is a bit depressing that some people get totally distracted by the slash and lose track of the actual ideas.

so yeah, all in all, this fic was good. there were a few minor things that could be tweaked, but it's good as it is. :-)

I agree, I don't like this type of storyline. I'd prefer that talented writers direct their attention toward other types of plots. As a man, I can assure you that not all men are desperate enough for sexual activity to turn to others of the same sex. Additionally, I believe that if anyone in WWII was getting attention from the opposite sex, it was the guys in Stalag 13! They had no need to resort to homosexuality!

Just an aside: God doesn't make mistakes, but he allows us free will. And being a homosexual, while not what God had in mind when he created man, doesn't become a sin until it's acted upon. Satan tempts everyone in the area they are weakest; naturally, if someone has homosexual tendencies, that's where their weakness lies, and Satan will attempt to capture their soul through that sin. Likewise, overeaters are tempted by food; materialists through greed; gamblers, child molesters, alcoholics, drug addicts, all through their weakest point. God doesn't exclude homosexuals from His kingdom, but acting on the temptation is a sin per the Bible.

I just wanted to say what a lovely piece I found this to be. I'm not usually a slash fan either, which I suppose is another compliment to your writing skills!

The only problem I had with it was the whole "Andrew" thing, but that's been mentioned before, so I won't harp on it.

Overall, I'd just like to say that this piece is very well done, so thank you for sharing!

PS: OT, but..."...contrary to the law of God"? And here I was thinking that god makes no mistakes. I would have thought that there would be nothing contrary to what god made. My bad, I guess.

While you are a good writer, I truly wish people didn't add this smut to the fandom. I choose not to read this sort of thing. Of course, you're free to write it if you want, but it's my choice not to read it. For a show that is as enjoyable as this one was, it's a shame that people's imaginations can't stay at the same comic level that the show functioned at, rather than dropping it to the level that showcases behaviour that is contrary to the law of God.

I think that it is a credit to your writing that most of your reviews said something to the effect of "I don't usually like slash fics, but yours was very well written." That a group of highly loyal fans that usually don't read this breed of fiction like it says that your writing is both technically supurb and stylistically awesome. _ Many kudos to you. It is rare to have an author who writes fics (and even more rarely slash fics) of any quality. You did it beautifully. _ Good work!

I agree with the previous posters who said that your final line was great. Endings are the hardest thing to write, I think.

Brilliant fic, dear.

I think you got the boys' voices just right. Carter's babbling at the end is just perfect, as is his aimless mind wandering and mattress lump poking.

I am a fan.

And your Newkirk. I love his "I love you" proclamation that isn't. That was brilliant.

And Hogan and Klink were so getting it on. Everyone knows that.

And LeBeau. Absolutely adorable. A perfect way to end this fic.

Kudos to you Missie Ducaine.

My only note would be a technical one: It's Kommandant, not Commandant. That's all. And that's only if you want to be very, very technical.

Keep up the brilliant writing!

I'm not a fan of slash at all, but nevertheless, this was very well written. However, I did have one problem with it (besides the Hogan/Klink thing). I just don't see Carter nearly as naive as you portrayed him. Not in this environment, where everybody was getting his "needs fulfilled", in between the espionage, sabotage, and rescue missions. I think a POW would grow up pretty darn fast.

In your bio you said you write a lot of slash, which is your prerogative, of course. But with your talent, I hope you don't limit yourself to only that genre. After all, it’s a big galaxy, M. DuCaine.

(My first review wouldn't load, so sorry if I'm repeating myself.)

While I'm not crazy about slash in this fandom, this story is well written & possibly realistic to the setting.

The only thing out of character is the "they never call me Andrew" stuff. Actually they did quite often, but someone already mentioned it.

LOVED LeBeau's line at the end! Very in character.