I cried, But i aldso got that warm feeling at the end, i was filled with hate over eric cartman, but i also loved to read this story. This is the best fanfic ivé ever been reading, thanx for letting me read it. *Sniffle*

oh my god... holy shit... I'm not sure how to describe this.

You blew my mind. Normally I hate slash fiction when I don't think the characters are gay but damned if you didn't change my mind. I read this in one night and... wow.

First off, you captured the characters really well. Cartman's sadistic need for control- I liked how it was never about loving Kyle but about owning him. Also, I liked how natural Stan and Kyle were. So often in slash fiction one of the characters becomes a whiney little bitch about it but here the transition was so smooth.

And Kenny. Kenny forever my favorite, I loved his character. How he was able to accept Stan and Kyle and immediately figure out what Cartman had done. I'll be honest, the only change I really would have wanted would be more Kenny. Just that whole sort of Friendship/support thing he had and the bassassery that is Kenny.

Also enjoyed the Nazi motif, so much less random than other fics. I aggree that consentual Cartman/Kyle would never work.

Excellent job!

I loved the ending, it's sweet in way =3

That was a very cruel chapter =O

Simply amazing. You gave the characters a wonderful, natural twist in this story that seems bigger than life. How refreshing it is to be reminded that there are worse things that can happen than being ostracized in school for being gay or fear of rejection by the one you're in love with. Great story you have here.

Ok that, was stunning. There is no other word for it. Cartman's twisted sociopathic tendencies shown in the show were very well extrapolated to what might become of him if left unchecked. Of course they wouldn't ever admit that on the show, but he really does act like a crazy raipst sometimes. The ending was especially touching, and Kenny's role was great. I am really in awe of your writing skills, especialy in light of the fact that english is not your first language. The only mistakes I saw were trivial typos that I easily could have made myself. All in all, this is definately one of the best South Park fanfics I have ever, (and probably will ever) read.

That was so sad! The end made me smile (I'd have more indepth reactions but it's two in the morning and I was going to go to bed before I found this and read all the way through it in one sitting.) But goodness! That's going into the favorites! Thank you for that captive story!

wow, good story!

this fanfic was so dark and yet so beautiful, not that i like what cartman did but the emotions were so real. i felt like crying. this is one of the best fanfictions i have ever read.

that was a very good story. :)

Uhm... flawless. So well-written. I'm kind of in shock, now that I've finished reading. Amazing.

You really broke my heart in this chapter, you know that? The first scene (finding Kyle) was truly sad, and I almost started to cry when poor Kyle muttered that pathetic "I'll suck you like you're Stan..." ;_; Other heartbreaking moments were when Kyle recognized Stan, and when he's like an empty shell in the hospital. (I fail to say anything coherent here, because I just couldn't turn my emotions off and my grammar/spelling nazi side on. :P Bear with me.) And damn you, I'll never be able to think other Kyle/Cartman-relationship ever again. Every time I think of them, your story pops into my mind. Fortunately, there is always some ray of hopes and some lovely Style to save me from the dark CartmanKyle. :D

Despite what other reviews have said, I think this chapter was a perfect way of ending the story and thus, it doesn't need any kind of an epiloque. The last line was simply perfect, holding a small ray of hope in the otherwise very dark story. No need to ruin that by telling how Kyle will slowly but surely be healthier again... even if he'll never recover fully again.

In conclusion: this was excellent, number one CartmanKyle story. I really don't see (anymore) how their relationship could be interpret otherwise, and props for making me think your story during my worktime. There are very, very few stories that have managed to consume so much of my brain capacity that it was pretty hard to concentrate to work, and your did so constantly. :P

(Ohohoho, 100th review, will joo writes mee a award storys nao?? :D)

I don't think this chapter "sucked", as you so sophisticately put it, but rather, the pace slowed down. Dunno what you could do to fix that, though. :P The cliffhanger in the end was a bit annoying in my opinion; you could have just included the scene where they find Kyle and then end the chapter, and that way start the next chapter more epiloque-like. (That's not a word, I'm pretty sure of that, but shus, let's pretend that it is.)

And a couple of random remarks: I liked how Kenny was suspicious of Cartman, the CartmanKyle opening scene was great and... uh, that's about it. I'll move on to the next chapter.

great story! i think im going to see cartman as a creepy hitler wannabe for a long time =) lol. poor poor kyle...loved it!!
p.s thanks for the review =)

I'm so sad to see that this is over. A sequel would be VERY gernerous...say, a fic about Kyle's mental and emotional recovery? I'd love to see how you would present it, and I would review it right away. That's really saying a lot, considering I only review stories that are exceptional in my opinion.

This is probably my FAVORITE non-con C/K fic, it was so suspensful and intense and disturbing. Then again, all of your writing is extremely wonderful and well done. The emotions you bring out are so vivid, I love it. I really,really,really hope to see more from you! Fantastic work :)