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| violetXice 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseI think this is probably my third or forth time reading this story lol. Its really really sweet and I think it's very believable. It definately reminds me of something Michelle would do, and I absolutely LOVE the angle you took with Michelle because she is absolutely a bad ** and I think alot of people forget that when they write about her and make her whiney and always needing someone to help her. It's just all in all a great story. |
| MichelleBA 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseGreat job! It was adorable, I love how you lixed the hard-core champion with the gentle loving woman...it was good!! |
| TM Fan 2008-03-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! I love this story!!thanks for it and can't wait to read more about our sweetest couple! |
| crazylove06 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was really sweet, I loved all the playful banter and the ending line was beautiful, really tied it all in |