I think Lacey's just another Tanya, bitchy and pathetic. But, I'm sure you are going to humiliate her or something...I'm looking forward to that! Oh and awesome story!

i really like this story,,am still a bit ** off at bella for thinking that, but i guess deep deep down she was just using that as her mask or something to hide the pain...

i liked how u ended it, but hope that at least they were engaged or married,,something to close the deal..
oh well, congrats and good luck

Love it!

awesome story
i just felt like there were a lot of loose ties you didn't finish up. like celine and lacey - you implied they were just after bella's money, but by the sounds of it they actually got it, because bella never kicked them out of her house. things like that
but i did like the story a lot :-)

so is she 18 yet? because if she is, then her aunt and cousin have to leave her house, since it belongs to her

just a thought. cause i wouldn't let people who treat me like crap live in my house if i was in control of it

LilyALice..
You're a reader of Percy Jackson, right? :D

Msg me if my guess is right! ;) :P

OMG! I love yur story! It was amazing :) it made me cry! I love it! Great work.

Chaz...x

it really is a beautiful story with equally beautiful ending!

why didn't she read his e-mail then??

-sigh-

i hate it when bella's aunt and cousin come!!
if they didn't come, bella can go with them to cali!!
hix...

aww man there should be a suquel ! I LOVE THIS STORY. i know ive read ALOT , ALOT, ALOT of stories on fanfiction..but this...this is the BEST ! You write like its from a personal angle. It's really good ! Dont stop writing. ;)

OMG that carolyna song is the perfect song for this !!

I LOVE this story! hopefully you will write a sequel!

wow you have no idea how amazing this story is. i love it completely
i just started reading it
and this chapter totally had me balling im literally crying
amazing job
thank you for this fan fic

This is such a good story. as i read this story i could feel the emotional pull it was weird...but its a REALLY good story.. one of the best i have ever read. and THANK YOU SOO MUCH for nearly perfect grammar. haha. :D keep writing!