No! its really interesting! Though i doub it I hope one day you will continue it!

To say I'm not a bit miffed by your outright demand for people not to adopt this story, would be a lie. The words you write here are indeed yours, but the idea for a story like this does NOT simply belong to you alone... No matter how much you may disagree. An Idea belongs to virtually anybody! It's what you do with that idea afterwords, the product, that is truly yours.

Anyone anywhere could have a similar story like this one. In fact, I'm almost positive they do. You being "Extremely Angry" over someone using this idea, is absolutely foolish; Childish even! Your tone seems to suggest more of a threat than a statement.

On another note, I'm sorry to hear your giving up on your story. It's a sad thing when a writer drops a story for one reason or another. Whatever they are, their your reasons, and us readers will simply have to take it in stride.

well written. this was awesome.

well written. i like this.

u suck

u suck

I agree with you its your story and magic is magic and magical animals can have their own lands and I love Au stories a lot

im sorry 2 c this story go but i hope u have luck with whatever u r planning to do and thanks 4 the notice instead of just deleting it without warning tks and good luck

nick

Sad to see you gave up on this even before it really got anywhere. But I do think the common rule is best, you gotta have 10 chapters ready before posting.
I did see something like this a while back. Don't remember the names, probably weren't the same. Hard to tell when there's tens of thousands of stories. I'm beginning to think no one can be original in hpverse anymore :)

Interesting start.
It would've been good if it was made clear from the beginning of the chapter who Harry was. Why change his name at all? It simply makes it more confusing, seeing there are SO many other new characters. Some of them aren't even introduced but just told about and then forgotten. I think there really shouldn't be characters roaming about that aren't very important to the plot or have time to be fleshed out.

i may have reviewed befor but i dont remember.so you havent abandoned this story have you. what happenes next?

love story
pleze update soon
~Hime~

wow! this idea is brilliant! its pretty unique and can go a really long way, i really hope you continue this story, it's fantastic!

This is a FANTASTIC story so far! I can't wait to see what happens next!

very interesting. i like it so far.

Who are all the Lords though?