are you gonna update this or not?
but this is a good story so far

Companions are white because they use magic that bleaches them white, all companions use magic, it is what makes the so fast and have such good stamina.

whenever you are ready to post then plase do and i will be there to read and review!!

interesting...a black companion...can't wait to read more

heyy, told ya I'd leave a review, wow I love this story.
Also, quit procrastinating darn it! just write the next chapter and get it over with! Geez...hehe, well laterz.

~No. Raine

plaease update! i really like this story, my only little complaint, shadow as a name isnt that imajantive, sorry, but everything else is good!

Yep...This Is REALLY short. Though you havwe a good structure to this story. The shortness of this does not give me a good feel for what is going on with your plotline. Back to the length of the last chapter PLEASE. Now if you would update this soon please.

Nice job. I liked how you started to show the bonding taking root. I am very curious to see what this pairs' life is going to be like. Good job. I look forward to more in the future.

You are such a good writer that it frustrates me to read silly, easy-to-fix-mistakes like "Leah ... road a little ahead to Give Shadow room to come and walk alongside Vic." Road = something you RIDE on! "Leah rode ahead" is the way it should have been written. Your blurb about "His birth was a foreshadowing of evil to come. The black Companion and his white haired Chosen whose powers are beyond belief. Two young lives twisted by a cruel fate that threatens them and everyone they love." REALLY got my attention!! You see, my mom was totally white-headed by the time she was 19, and has been ever since... ANYWAY, I think you are a great writer, and I can't wait to see how this story plays out!

Ok. You have managed to keep me interested. The length of this chapter was just right to be enjoyable, but not long enough to become tedious to read. You (and your beta) Have come up with something "read worthy" so far. You have a good plotline going. The structuring is sound, and there is a good "balance" to it. Now can you keep this trend going...I will find out next chapter. Update this soon please.

I have seen a story, or two about a "black" companion. Just not from birth. Good start to this story. Interesting is the least of what I can say about this. Now I will read the next post to this, and see if you keep me interested.

Hey this is a pretty good story. Just one thing that isn't really about the story. could you have chapter titles on the little scroll bar on the side? It's not anything serious now but later when you have several chapters, it'll help your readers remember what chapter they are on if they can't read up to the chapter that you last posted.

A fascinating concept. However, I have a question--why is Shadow black? Lackey states that Companions are white because they are constantly in contact with a certain type of energy which bleaches them. Therefore, there must be a reason why Shadow is not white, and I rather curious as to why.

Also, I like Vic, but isn't he a bit too smart? He is a horse, after all.

Keep going, I like it.

sounds good would like to hear more

This is AWESOME! I can't wait to read chapter 2! Keep up the great work!!