Wonderful story!!

Jayne's a girl's name!

I love that line in the show...

Good story, it's, interesting. I don't know many people who watch the show, and this is the first Firefly FF I've read, but I've never heard of a River/Jayne pairing.

Nice story

aww they really are so very cute together.

Cute! I like it. Nice job.

Can't decide if I'm happy for River and Jayne, or worried, but either way, I'm sure they'll enjoy the ride.

yay! woot woot!

Very good update. Great story of course, as I've said before, but a great play here, especially adding Inara back into the mix to 'stir' things a bit, lol.

Keep writing!

Very cute -- I like how quickly Inara is able to correctly discern what is going on, and the bit with River and Jayne in the infirmary is nice.

Nice storyline...keep up the good work!

ooh! yay! finally they are going to get somewhere! woot woot!

Ooh, nice chapter! So River's realized she's jealous - and is aware, at least partially, of Jayne's feelings. I enjoyed this a lot; and I definitely can't wait to see what happens next!

:) Great chapter - and good luck with the next part; I look forward to it!

God! i like seeing inara on board again and she is the perfect person for river to talk to about her problem concerning jayne...you have a good story line going on here, keep writing!

vary nice.

I like this story - silly and entertaining, and the characters ring true. Looking forward to updates :)

Oh, Inara is going to get involved! I can't wait to see how she'll affect the schemes aboard Serenity.