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| Mairi 2008-04-09 ch 8, anon. | abuseThis is a nice, cute little romance that I enjoyed reading. The writing is decent, too, so I have to congratulate you on this. Amazing. |
| iiL0V3JAPAN3S3B0iiS 2008-03-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my gosh, they kissed!! That is so cute, I can't wait until they tell each other how they feel about one another. =D |
| N0RiK0 NAKAGAWA 15 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseYay, you updated! This is amazing! Aw, Nobu and Noriko had their first kiss. And, looks like Nobu was "really" enjoying it... Please update soon! Keep up the good work! |
| iiL0V3JAPAN3S3B0iiS 2008-03-20 ch 5, anon. | abuseI have read all of the 5 chapters, and I must say, this is very good writing. It differs a bit from the movie and novel but in a good way. I'm certainly glad that Nobu is alive. Can't wait to see Chapter 6! |
| N0RiK0 NAKAGAWA #15 2008-03-20 ch 5, anon. | abuseWow, I never would've guessed Yumiko to have a crush on Yoshi. But I don't blame her, Nobu's a cutie! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| N0RiK0 NAKAGAWA #15 2008-03-20 ch 4, anon. | abuseAw, don't run away, Nobu! Noriko knows you're not a bad person! |
| N0RiK0 NAKAGAWA #15 2008-03-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseAw how cute, Yoshi's dreaming of Noriko. |
| N0RiK0 NAKAGAWA #15 2008-03-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseAnd so Battle Royale begins...amazing chapter! I love how you describe everything, it runs so smoothly. |
| N0RiK0 NAKAGAWA #15 2008-03-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseawesome chapter! love how yoshi tells shuya about the letter =) |
| RomanceFanatic20 2008-03-20 ch 4, anon. | abuselooks like mitsukos on her roll with killing and kazushi is being a pervert and yoshitoki is playing the game!? great chapter! i cant wait to see what happens next :D |
| RomanceFanatic20 2008-03-19 ch 3, anon. | abuselooks like the game has finally begun... great chapter! and it was oh so cute when noriko heard her name called out and her and yoshitoki were the only ones in the room... looks like yoshi is dreaming of her...and noriko was blushing!! cant wait to see the next chapter! |
| RomanceFanatic20 2008-03-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseanother great chapter! love yoshitoki and norikos reunion when yoshitoki comes back to school. :D |
| RomanceFanatic20 2008-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseamazing chapter! i smiled reading this, remembering how happy yoshitoki looked telling shuya about noriko writing to him. |