ok i love your writing.

kat

you're good, keep it up

I loved it! I loved how honest it was because i think that this is how Peyton and Lucas will turn out if Lucas keeps believing he loves Linsey (**)
Anyway...I loved the Pathan friendship and i hope you write more Pathna fics
Deanie

ROTFLMFAO Lucas ohh boy lol and Peyton's like "What ever" haha

I loved the ending damn I wanted them to kiss lol I'm confused about NH in this like always I'm confused in that relationship on the show as it is lol, but are they married or not lol

i loved it! if only nathan and peyton were there for each other on the show after the recent little fall outs. great job!

i hope you write more i love it!!

That was great!

This is the kind of friendship I'd always wish to see on OTH, but unfortunately it didn't happen..

Fabulous story! You have a great style of writing!

This was incredibly depressing. Well written, but depressing. I love the NP dynamic and am glad when you take a foray into writing them.

GREAT story! I love the Pathan bond! They don't show enough of it in the show - but if these were the circumstances I think you wrote it EXACTLY how it would pan out!

Great friendship oneshot. I love NP. And it was okay to make Lucas the jerk when this story is about Nathan being Peyton's knight in shining armor...lol. Amazing.