BROKE MY HEART. Poor Draco.

Your writing style is AMAZING, by the way. It is SO difficult to write in that perspective, and you pulled it off flawlessly.

This story was really interesting, good too. I wish you would write a sequel...

Gosh, that was excellent! I would just love to see you continue this story.

That was beautiful. I love the whole imagery that you use - it really sets the mood well. Greate job!

WOW! i LOVE it! its so amazing... i love draco... i just love him...

blessed be

jo!

wow ! definitely great ! i can't even give you a proper review, seeing this story is way beyond words.

the heartbroken part was draco's thought about "her and the occasional white-blonde, brown-eyed child with a face that is startlingly familiar…"

don't make a sequel, leave the grace here.

good job )

aw...so sad, but really well-written. i like the metaphor.