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Xejicka
2008-03-31 . chapter 4
Another awesome chapter, buddy.

I would've considered Julia's hair to be blonde rather than light brown, but it's how you see things.

I think they did point it out in the anime that bullets filled with Saya's blood doesn't work. I'm just letting you know that. I bet it's because it has to be super super fresh.

Also, what was the name of the Uverworld song in the previous chapter? I keep forgetting to ask.
Xejicka
2008-03-25 . chapter 3
Another great chapter. I did notice a few typos, nothing big.

I feel your Nathan theory abuo to arise. I also notices the maid's name. Heh heh, you cna't your wolf love go, can you?
Xejicka
2008-03-23 . chapter 2
Another great chapter. Sorry for the late reveiw.

I'll PM you the theory on DA.

I actually thought Kai would be paired off with that one girlin Britain, I forgot her name.

The school time affect is cool. Kaori, I think she is straight, I was really thinking about the girlfrom that fancy academy.

Oh well. Update when you can!
Xejicka
2008-03-23 . chapter 1
It's a great story. I was skeptical at first, but you reallt hit it.

I actually have a theory on Nathen,. I'll explain it later. However, I didn't think Kai would see Nathan again or know Nathan was alive.

The names for the twins was a good choice.

Is it me, or do bothof us like using our own names for our OCs?
Rax 13
2008-03-19 . chapter 1
Nice! :)
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