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Autumn Whispers
2008-05-10
ch 10,
abuseIt's not so bad...after I got throught the shock of remember Kurama was going to be married in 6 or less days (didn't know which day of the week it was...lol).

Poor Zura. I totally doubt hiei will stay away. He's just not that type of person, I think. And then he'll get her in trouble...

Love the last part - so yeah, technally you're right! If I could, I'd be jumping out of that window to tackle you, glomp you, and yell in your face at the same time.

Yusuki - no, it wasn't the worst chapter EVER...but it wasn't your best. But you posted SOMEFINK, so I'm happyful!
littlekawaiifirefox
2008-05-10
ch 10,
abusehaha...it wasn't THAT bad...trust me...i've seen worse from other people... -shudders-
icemaster91
2008-04-22
ch 9,
abusethat is so not fair
that sux and if that ever happened to me i would kill the person
who did it regardless of who it is.
or i atleast wouldn't speak to them for two years.
hey that's an idea have zura ignore kurama for a while
make him pay (rubbing hands and smiling evily)
Koori Youkai Hime
2008-04-03
ch 9,
abuseoh, tricky autumn! as always, i eagerly await the next chapter...
Wingshad0w
2008-04-03
ch 9,
abusemating shot, how cruel, putting them to sleep to get it is worse!
bwahahahhaa...
ok i'm done ranting now
nice chapter!
littlekawaiifirefox
2008-04-03
ch 9,
abuseaw!! this one was cute!! hehe
Autumn Whispers
2008-04-03
ch 9,
abuseWoah...I could get that evil? Didn't know that. O.o

Oo, oo!! Am I first, am I first? lol

Weird kiss scene in the end...didn't have much of a mental image for that, it was so weird! :) Not your fault, though.

And I don't have much to say, seeing as I already read it before hand, so um...yah.

I think it was the sweet snow...*sideglance to empty bowl sitting inconspiciously near computer* Yep. Definately the sweet snow. Def.
Ruby123
2008-04-01
ch 8,
abuseI love your story please update soon OKAY.
Koori Youkai Hime
2008-03-28
ch 8,
abuseok, loved this chapter! how about all the smoochies at the begining huh? totally yummy. but what's with all of that crap with the light killers and the strong emotions? that just sucks! now she'll be afraid to get close to hiei. gr... update soon!
Autumn Whispers
2008-03-28
ch 8,
abuse@_@ *falls over* Kwa? What just transpired throughout that chapter of work? *eye twitches* How is it possible I went from being single to being a certain someone's fiance in a matter of a few minutes and a whole lot of words? My brain hurts...and Tostitos rock. Especially with salsa.

Only you could come up with a tracking device that was made by someone's OWN blood...ever realize that the only way to de-track yourself is to kill yourself? Wait - that's the point, isn't it?

*Note to J: Sorry, but I told you already - I sold my soul to an albino hermit/hobo thing for a rock, half a pixie stick, and five bucks. I think I got the shorter end of the stick compared to Yusuki, who sold hers on Ebay. Or was it someplace else? Meh, I can't remember...

*holds out chocolate, then whacks you on the nose with it* If you tease Kurama, I'll hurt you! (Not really...I kinda want to see his reaction to that myself...)
littlekawaiifirefox
2008-03-28
ch 8,
abuseO.o i love your story, but... o.O yeah...no soul for you, but here's plenty of CHOCOLATE! :D

btw...when will you be updating your torture series?
.Ink.Infinity.
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abuseCOLIO!
GO KILLER WOLF DEMON GIRL!
~Inky-chan

*Autumn: You know, if I had sent you to review this chapter after not even reading the first story and AFTER giving her a tub of sweet snow, she wouldn't have even had this problem...-sigh- btw, YO, What's up, Yusuki! And HA!! That's 15!! SO THERE!*
Koori Youkai Hime
2008-03-28
ch 6,
abusewoo hoo! go hiei! *does happy dance* i can't wait to see what happens next!
Koori Youkai Hime
2008-03-28
ch 5,
abusehehehe, oh that is so evil of you...i love it!! *grins* i can't wait to see what happens. so, on to the next chapter i go!
Koori Youkai Hime
2008-03-28
ch 4,
abuseaw! so sweet, being alone at the waterfall. *sighs* on
through the chapters i move!
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