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Autumn Whispers
2008-07-24
ch 12,
abuseHello, 'Suki. Jeez, could you pick a better place to leave everyone off? She didn't hurt Hiei did she? She only hurt Trentone, right? If she did hurt him, I'm going to cry. -gets box of tissues at the ready-

Throughout all this, I feel bad for Kurama the most. She'll let Hiei know everything, but Kurama wakes up to find the both of them gone, and he'll live through a life of panic with us here, eh? We'll never give him a break. XD

Listening to "dancing through life" from Wicked, and Glinda said "black is this year's new pink". Reminded me of Hiei.

Sorry I didn't review earlier, I'd always go to review and then something would interrupt me. -sigh- Don't hate me!
littlekawaiifirefox
2008-07-21
ch 12,
abuse8O no way! NO WAY! HIEI CAN'T DIE! NO WAY! -sobs-

(wonderful chapter, though!! keep up the good work!! ;D )
Kurai-Gaara
2008-06-09
ch 11,
abuseI can't believe Zura left. Of course Hiei wouldn't listen. Great Story.
littlekawaiifirefox
2008-05-21
ch 11,
abusei loved this chapter!! it was a great one to edit, too!! ^^ i love being your BETA!!
Autumn Whispers
2008-05-21
ch 11,
abuseWell that was short. But it's a new chapter!! Yayness!

Zura's a bit...masochistic (well, that's putting it a bit too strongly, but she's hurting herself AND Hiei) isn't she? Well, no, not really, but why does she have to run off?

...How do you think that you already uploaded something?

And it dodn't suck, it was short. Quality versus quantity. Can't say I do it, but...oh god, I'm such a hypocrite. :P

I can't believe I would see the day someone would put "cute" before Hiei's name. Mysterious, sadistic (lol, jk) maybe, but when I think cute, I think pink. And you, of all people, know what happened when we associated Hiei with pink.
Autumn Whispers
2008-05-10
ch 10,
abuseIt's not so bad...after I got throught the shock of remember Kurama was going to be married in 6 or less days (didn't know which day of the week it was...lol).

Poor Zura. I totally doubt hiei will stay away. He's just not that type of person, I think. And then he'll get her in trouble...

Love the last part - so yeah, technally you're right! If I could, I'd be jumping out of that window to tackle you, glomp you, and yell in your face at the same time.

Yusuki - no, it wasn't the worst chapter EVER...but it wasn't your best. But you posted SOMEFINK, so I'm happyful!
littlekawaiifirefox
2008-05-10
ch 10,
abusehaha...it wasn't THAT bad...trust me...i've seen worse from other people... -shudders-
icemaster91
2008-04-22
ch 9,
abusethat is so not fair
that sux and if that ever happened to me i would kill the person
who did it regardless of who it is.
or i atleast wouldn't speak to them for two years.
hey that's an idea have zura ignore kurama for a while
make him pay (rubbing hands and smiling evily)
Koori Youkai Hime
2008-04-03
ch 9,
abuseoh, tricky autumn! as always, i eagerly await the next chapter...
Wingshad0w
2008-04-03
ch 9,
abusemating shot, how cruel, putting them to sleep to get it is worse!
bwahahahhaa...
ok i'm done ranting now
nice chapter!
littlekawaiifirefox
2008-04-03
ch 9,
abuseaw!! this one was cute!! hehe
Autumn Whispers
2008-04-03
ch 9,
abuseWoah...I could get that evil? Didn't know that. O.o

Oo, oo!! Am I first, am I first? lol

Weird kiss scene in the end...didn't have much of a mental image for that, it was so weird! :) Not your fault, though.

And I don't have much to say, seeing as I already read it before hand, so um...yah.

I think it was the sweet snow...*sideglance to empty bowl sitting inconspiciously near computer* Yep. Definately the sweet snow. Def.
Ruby123
2008-04-01
ch 8,
abuseI love your story please update soon OKAY.
Koori Youkai Hime
2008-03-28
ch 8,
abuseok, loved this chapter! how about all the smoochies at the begining huh? totally yummy. but what's with all of that crap with the light killers and the strong emotions? that just sucks! now she'll be afraid to get close to hiei. gr... update soon!
Autumn Whispers
2008-03-28
ch 8,
abuse@_@ *falls over* Kwa? What just transpired throughout that chapter of work? *eye twitches* How is it possible I went from being single to being a certain someone's fiance in a matter of a few minutes and a whole lot of words? My brain hurts...and Tostitos rock. Especially with salsa.

Only you could come up with a tracking device that was made by someone's OWN blood...ever realize that the only way to de-track yourself is to kill yourself? Wait - that's the point, isn't it?

*Note to J: Sorry, but I told you already - I sold my soul to an albino hermit/hobo thing for a rock, half a pixie stick, and five bucks. I think I got the shorter end of the stick compared to Yusuki, who sold hers on Ebay. Or was it someplace else? Meh, I can't remember...

*holds out chocolate, then whacks you on the nose with it* If you tease Kurama, I'll hurt you! (Not really...I kinda want to see his reaction to that myself...)
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