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well hi there
2009-12-05 . chapter 66
please continue to wright, i going crazy! i love this story!
mustan/ncisfreak
2009-11-30 . chapter 41
If this were an ncis episode than it would be on my Ipod, seriously great, great, great job, this is exactly like tension on the show and no one else could have nailed it better, incredible. Now if only they did that in season 7...hm. :)
Mustang/ncisfreak
2009-11-30 . chapter 67
this is by far the best fan-fic i have ever read, really. I can't wait for the next chapter. My GUT tells me that eli threatened tony and/or penny to force ziva to come home.
well hi there
2009-11-29 . chapter 67
i LOVE this story, i love how you have the cliff hangers, but if you don't continue to write i think the suspense will kill me... please keep up the great writing. and ZIVA CAN NOT GO BACK, SHE JUST CAN'T. IT WILL KILL TONY, PENNY AND ME. PLEASE MAKE HER STAY. please!
EternalConfusion
2009-11-29 . chapter 67
No! She can't back, it's not allowed :P Great update though.

We haven't spoken in a while so: yay for the remission; I think puppies are programmed to be monsters; and you should totally talk about this DiNozzo... hope things are all good for you at the moment, naught puppy aside, hehe.

Anyway, my review was late, but I finally got round to it, and it was awesome, but not liking that she's going to Israel. Nuh uh.
N. C. I. S.336
2009-11-28 . chapter 67
i have been reading this since the begining and i absolutly love it. I'm basicly addictid to it. And you can NOT send Ziva back. thats just crule. but plz plz plz update soon, im going crazy having to wait.
ShiNozzo
2009-11-22 . chapter 67
I just found this story the day before yesterday and read up through the whole thing. It seems I haven't done anything else these past few days. I just couldn't pull myself away from it. Please post the new chapter soon?
SHuntress
2009-11-22 . chapter 45
ah, 'kay Ducks is an uncle too :)
hm, *raises her hand and frowns* okay, so Penny fell down and hurt herself a bit. Why did they have to overreact like that? Why not just check Penny out right away and then do to Ducky or patch her up at home? Children take nasty falls all the time. ;) Besides that nice chapter :)
LosingTrack
2009-11-22 . chapter 67
Loved the chapter! Update soon!
SHuntress
2009-11-22 . chapter 38
I am with Tony here ;) Puppies are nightmares, pure and simple. We were in the same situation once. Ages ago my sister got a puppy for her birthday from a friend, who had not asked before, if we even wanted a dog! The next two dogs were strays that followed us home one day and never left. They were at least trained! Since the last one passed away we are sticking to cats, like before we had the first dog. Cats are easy. And rats too. Budgies are a mess but cute.
But no more dogs!
SHuntress
2009-11-21 . chapter 12
Oh I so want to know if Ducky will become Grandpa Ducky ;)
Enjoyed it so far and uhm well... cried a lot too :)
fearlessgoddess2
2009-11-19 . chapter 67
No! Nonononono, she can't go! Penny would cry! And Tony would cry! And then I would cry!
DarkGrayWolf
2009-11-19 . chapter 67
THAnk you for updating i have been awaiting this for a while! and omg Ziva cannot go back to isreal!no!i ned you to update lol need haha, i cant wait for an update
Ko'u Melia
2009-11-18 . chapter 67
if you make us wait long for the next chapter someone is going to die.
loved it, but i don't think I can take the suspense.
Arielle.Pevensie
2009-11-18 . chapter 67
I have devoted multiple hours over the past few days to reading this story - time well spent! I admit, my first reaction to 'Ziva has to go back to Israel' was one of horror (HappilyTogetherTiva is thwarted at every turn!) but this story has an amazingly resilient, well thought-out plot, and now I'm mostly excited to see how it will turn out. And of course I've only just found out about your mom being ill and now being in remission, but for your sake, I'm so glad she'd doing better!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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