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| Blood And Ink 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseShort, sweet, sorta fluffy, and to the point. It was cute. Next time, make more sense on your stories though. Like how she left, where she went, don't just randomly skip to places. I used to do that with some of my first stories, but I learned. ~Nikki~ |