What a beautiful ending! I really enjoyed this entire fic! Excellent writing, a really solid plot! 10/10

Justice Infant of Chaos! lol Thats what it's startin to sound like. I think it's adorable that they allowed Amelia to be the godmother. It;s sweet!

Oh no! No little Nagas EVER! Could you imagine a baby laughing like Naga? The world would end! lol I like how you explained the labor, it seemed so real. Another great chapter!

Aw. Filia is gonna try and be a mommy. Maybe this will be a bonding experience for both new mothers? Vary beautiful chapter!

A cute story. You did a wonderful job maturing the characters while remaining true to their nature.

I can't believe that I haven't reviewed this yet! (actually I have but that was before I had a profile... my name was 'VFIN')

Anyway, perfect as usual! Really loved the motherly side of Lina, which I feel exists even if some people say it doesn't!

And about Naga... Who really decides what is out of character...

Just have to say that this is not the end, because even if you put the THE END in there, Slayers NEVER ends!

Ah, it's over! I admired how you mangaged to include so many plot elements without it seeming cluttered. Between the pregnancy, Naga's return and "Val's" entrance, there was a lot of story to set up for when you begin your next potential fic, but it didn't take attention away from the main plot.

I think I mentioned this before, but I loved your reference to TRY's version of baby Val's appearance. "An egg dropping from the sky in a mess of sparkles and feathers" (paraphrasing). I also loved Naga's reaction to Lina's situation, "they allowed you to spawn?"

I enjoyed Gourry's contribution to the conversation at the end of the story. Lina's perspective about their life was that it was changing drastically, while Gourry had placed togetherness as a greater priority to adventure and didn't think it was changing at all. Something about that was very sweet in the way you wrote him saying it so innocently, as if it was his natural reaction. As we just saw in episode 4 of Evo, Gourry obviously believes people are more important than adventure and excitment, so the last chapter seemed very in-character for him.

*Does Amelia's "fan-girl" wiggle*

*sigh* Thank you! I love it and it took you very long to end it! Thank you very much!

I wouldn't mind reading an OC story as long as the main characters are the focus. :)

I'll put you on alert, so I know when you post it. ;P

Makes me wonder how she is going to deal with competing stores: Is she going to pull a Wal-mart on them or just liberally use Burst Flare?

Excellent ending. Loved it!

^_^ Write more soon!

Hm i make it short!

Gorgeous! Thank you Bunny for writing it!

Which character were you worried about writing? If it was Naga, well, I think everything panned out perfectly in this chapter.

It sounds as if Lina had a rough labor, though. Poor girl.

Aw. Can't believe I didn't read this before (or, maybe I forgot?).

Good choices, Lina! :P Amelia simply rocks. (Hehehe, gotta love biased reviews!)