aw sad poor kiba

This so sad, I can't wait to read In my arms!

O_O KIBA!

I like this songfic, the song actually fit. Some stories I read usually doesn't connect with the fic at all. Guilt, ehehe. I've written or is still writing songfics and none of them compare to yours. My sister even write songdic better then I do. All I'm saying is that I really liked yours even though I didn't like Kiba dying at the end, sobs. You should write more songfics, but please, happy ones.

A goddess? Really? *blushes* I'm glad you like my writing so much! I'm flattered!

*Reads yer fanfic*

Write the sequel. Now. I wanna know what happens next! XD
I loved how the song matched your fanfic so perfectly. And how Kiba can't be with Hinata, even in death, because he thinks that she's destined to go to Heaven while he's burning in Hell. That transforms the angsty-ness into tragic-ness and makes it even more depressing. I loved it from start to finish! Except when Kiba killed himself...but that's just cuz I'm a Kiba lover and don't want him to ever die in any fanfics ever. (Unless I kill him off...which I'm pretty sure I did in one of my KibaHinas...Oh, that reminds me! If you haven't read A Single Lavender Flower or Letting Go by moi, you should go check them out! Angsty KibaHina for all!)

But anyways, I really think you did a fantastic job of making this angsty fic...well, angsty! You did a good job of capturing the emotions of a broken-hearted Kiba and transferring them into words for me to enjoy. (Did that make any sense...? Oh well lol. I hope you know what I mean.)

And as for suggestions...I really can't give you any. I think you did a wonderful job with this and the way it was written made me overlook any grammar or spelling error, because I didn't notice any. You did a great job!

Thanks for suggesting this for me to read! I think you did an awesome job with it! And I hope you like my review as well! ^^

~ Cloud