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| Paint Splatter 2008-06-27 ch 2,  | abuseSo, I was all "Even though I don't usually read INCOMPLETE works", I was in a mood for some DAVID POV. And wow, you're really good at it! I had the same idea (Ha, who doesn't?), but I'm not really good with the guy POV, so I didn't do it. But wow, you're just... good! I love how you captured him. Idano, tonight I was in a mood for All-American Girl fanfictions and this one is EXACTLY what I'd want to read. You know, if it was complete. So get out of your hiatus and write some more, kay? You're an amazing writer and capture David really good. Did I mention that already? xP Oh and on your writing stuff, I like how you don't have spelling errors, and well, just everything. Good humour too. So, as I said before. WRITE SOME MOAR! |
| ummmhilol 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abusesorry i'm reviewing back to back but i forgot to add this to my story alert list haha |
| ummmhilol 2008-05-16 ch 2, | abusethis is really good. i like it. update soon please =] |
| swtSARA 2008-04-22 ch 2, | abusehhahaahahah! nice job! you know i had a problem..ahem..STILL have a problem writing in a guys point of view so dont worry about it! ur doing great! Hey cud you maybe read mine too! its based after the first book ! review too! id really like it! |
| ikffrox 2008-04-10 ch 2, | abuseOoh, update soon!! |
| All Tears Must Fall. 2008-04-01 ch 2, | abuseWow THis Soundz Totally Awsome! I Hope You Update Soon. :D |
| Lilyflower101 2008-03-31 ch 2, | abusegreat chapter! please update soon! david seems more like himself! great job |
| humaaaa 2008-03-31 ch 2, | abusegreat chapter update soon :] |
| charmed242 2008-03-31 ch 2, | abuseyup a random chapter. But none-the-less it was a nice one... plz update ASAP...wn is the nxt update gonna be? |
| TheNightimeSky 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseI like it! Loved that book so much, it's cool to see how david thought. :) |
| humaaaa 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abusegreat chapter :) |
| charmed242 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseHeyy...it was gr8! i never thot bout tht...nice concept.. Davids POV... pl;z update soon! |
| Lilyflower101 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abusei think it's pretty good so far...but david seems a little out of character though...anyways good chapter please update soon! |