oh update soon please

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its really good

plz continu this is great

Chelsea :) This is great! Though it makes me sad. I dont like Edward being unhappy! Keep Writing :)

xox

This is good! Poor Edward.

Write more!

i cant belive you only got that many reviews! you deserve so much more. your writing is beautiful and if you think no one is gonna read it (which i dont think you will think but just in case) then you know that i will read and like savor every word cause I luv ur stories, so keep going and write for me if not for anyone else.

luv ya lots

topazstar22

Oh gosh ! Whats going to happen?

Update son please !