 aosugiru sora 3/4/12 . chapter 1This was simply adorable. And, it's just like Goku to be so oblivious. Well done!
sora |
 Laree England 12/30/11 . chapter 1 Loooooove it! |
 J 9/11/10 . chapter 1 A really sweet simple story. I liked how you really captured the innocence and naiveness of Goku in relation to love and romance.
Well done! |
 bowlfullofcherries 8/30/10 . chapter 1haha. that poor girl. i can totally relate. so like a man. doing something sweet without even knowing. |
 howl 8/24/10 . chapter 1 This is so frakin' adorable. You wrote Goku and Chi-chi's personalities spot-on. It reminds me that the simplest gestures is the sweetest of all...and that Goku's a natural romantic. :3 |
 doctorwho29 1/13/10 . chapter 1That was really, really funny! I enjoyed it. |
 Marrrrss 7/27/09 . chapter 1This was so adorable.
you got Goku's character completely DOWN. lols,
he is so clueless, but that's what makes him even cuter ;D
i swear...i wish i could have a Goku in the real life. X3 |
 Anon 7/16/09 . chapter 1 Who! 70th review! That's quite a benchmark for a oneshot, and it's well deserved. This is ADORABLE. ;) |
 Jane Black278 7/5/09 . chapter 1Aww.. this was so sweet! :D I love Goku! After all, he is still a child (in intimacy , I do not think so xD) small details can make big prizes :O :D
and the song: very funny! jejeje xD
I like it a lot! :) |
 Doctor Kiba 2/7/09 . chapter 1Aw, this was so cute and in character! |
 Bunny1 1/27/09 . chapter 1Aw... sweet... |
 Aizou 12/22/08 . chapter 1Lovely little one-shot you've got here... Light hearted but spot-on character-wise! Excellent stuff, made me smile and all :)
Goku's personality is so cute here but you haven't made him into a complete moron, which is what many seem to do. Well done! |
 Sony89 7/7/08 . chapter 1that was so romantic and sweet ;) |
 Romania Black 10/15/06 . chapter 1 Aw! I loved it! you really portrayed Goku's naiveness to a T! So sweet! This is one of my new fave stories! Hope to read more of yours,
Romania black |
 Meiza 7/27/06 . chapter 1Aw, that is so sweet! It's always the simplest things that mean the most. I wonder if Chi Chi will ever explain to Goku why him bringing her dinner was so special. I loved how Goku kept calling Chi Chi's expession 'the look.' |