I really liked this story! It was short and cute, and I think it really shows who the characters are. Great job on it!

Aw!

Mike this is my favorite story of your yet keep up the awesome work!

I hadn't heard of Lost in Blue, but it sounds a little bit like Castaway, which I enjoyed greatly. I've always wondered what it would be like to get into a survival situation where you have to live by your wits and skills. So this kind of story is pretty cool.

I like your use of third person. Hope you write more.