 hobbits on the island 2008-03-20 . chapter 1GREETINGS
Obviously I'm reviewing because I liked your poem a lot, especially the last line that tied it all together, almost like a sonnet. It was very well done and I hope you write more!
cheers |
 LuvtoWrite 2008-03-19 . chapter 1So true...darn old Kate! haha, great poem! |
 xKatieBearx 2008-03-19 . chapter 1Wow, that was so awesome!
And really sad too :(
Kate's my favourite character, and her past is so sad!
This has got to be my favourite line, i can relate to it myself, it was just the best;
But you can’t run from the past,
Or the things from it that scar:
No one can run that fast;
And no one can run that far.
anyway. that was seriously awesome, you should do more Kate stuff :) the show just seem to stick her in a triangle between Sawyer and Jack, and don't focus on her as a person, or her past anymore. and there's way more to her then just the 'love triangle'. ;)
xox Katie |
 KittenSnickers 2008-03-19 . chapter 1Hey This poem is good,
But you can’t run from the past,
Or the things from it that scar:
No one can run that fast;
And no one can run that far.
-x-
Still, though, you have to try;
To not let them catch up, those things that you’ve done.
So you whisper another hasty good-bye,
And head off into the setting sun.
-x-
After all, you were born to run.
That bit is definietly the best part,
I love it.
Good Job. |
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