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hobbits on the island
2008-03-20 . chapter 1
GREETINGS
Obviously I'm reviewing because I liked your poem a lot, especially the last line that tied it all together, almost like a sonnet. It was very well done and I hope you write more!
cheers
LuvtoWrite
2008-03-19 . chapter 1
So true...darn old Kate! haha, great poem!
xKatieBearx
2008-03-19 . chapter 1
Wow, that was so awesome!
And really sad too :(
Kate's my favourite character, and her past is so sad!

This has got to be my favourite line, i can relate to it myself, it was just the best;

But you can’t run from the past,
Or the things from it that scar:
No one can run that fast;
And no one can run that far.

anyway. that was seriously awesome, you should do more Kate stuff :) the show just seem to stick her in a triangle between Sawyer and Jack, and don't focus on her as a person, or her past anymore. and there's way more to her then just the 'love triangle'. ;)
xox Katie
KittenSnickers
2008-03-19 . chapter 1
Hey This poem is good,
But you can’t run from the past,

Or the things from it that scar:

No one can run that fast;

And no one can run that far.

-x-

Still, though, you have to try;

To not let them catch up, those things that you’ve done.

So you whisper another hasty good-bye,

And head off into the setting sun.

-x-

After all, you were born to run.

That bit is definietly the best part,
I love it.
Good Job.
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