a great fiction. bravo. Kanda was not so out of character, even if she was a girl.

I just wanted to say how amazing this story was. I liked each passing chapter more and more.

I was curious to know how Kanda would react to seeing that Lavi was with Lenalee. And I loved reading about Lavi and Kanda's past. It was so cute, had me sometimes wishing it was a LaviYuu. But I loved it as Yullen. I was guaranteed that Lavi needed at least on punch after hurting Kanda.

I loved the story of the Noah and what happened when Kanda got kidnapped. Like Allen comforting her and the kiss.

Oh and the OC's were good too. I liked the interactions that they had with Kanda throughout. And hearing bits and pieces of how Hisaki was after he got the sis complex and how Kanda would cling to him. That was just too adorable.

The epilogue was good too. Poor Lavi getting beaten up by his child and nephew. XD And Ame-chan sounded really cute.
I also thought it was funny at the part about Kanda in labour.

What I'm curious about is what exactly was in that picture that Allen had of Kanda.

Once again great story. I really enjoyed it.

Great story! The epilogue was a bit confusing but I still loved it...

"It's a good thing my left hand is hard as metal" XD
I wuz laughing really hard... I think I scared a couple people...

some of the forms of words are incorrect- nothing too serious. just double check your writing or get a beta.

i'm so excited. i didn't think i'd like a fic with changed gender, but kanda doesn't seem that much different, so it doesn't matter. i like your fic very much, so far.

Nice. I usually dont read genderbenders, but this story is really good! Instant favourite!

LOL at the kanda when she? is in labour... but i cant quite imagine kanda being pregnant.. it doesnt quite work because kanda wouldnt bother putting up with children xD

This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read that has Kanda as a girl. >o< I've been looking for a decent one since forever and I'm glad I just happened to click on yours! Good work! ;)

Well this was a cute story. n.n.
Keep up the good work!

i have a question that is not included in the story...
do you think d. gray man will have another season?

Nice twist with the story! One of my favs! XD

cute! \Ô/
It is sad to coment now, that the story is over and I don´t get to give opinion T.T

anyway! I just found out that D-G.man can make quite cute fics... /o/ So only recently I found
joys of D.G.Man´s fanfiction hohoho! *laugthing like a lunatic*

bye! n.n

LOL. Poor Lavi. That was hilarious! =D The part where Kanda was in labour was hilarious too. =D I love it!

-sniffle- a truly wonderful ending to this amazing story TT^TT -gets all teary eyed- THIS HAS HONESTLY BEEN ONE OF MY MOST FAVORITE STORIES EVER! and i can still say that i love it to absoulute death ^x^ (and i thank you for remembereing that Allen has NATURAL brown hair :) i hope you update soon on all your other wonderful fics and i cant wait for any stories that you have yet to make, keep it up nya~!
~Lonely Kitty

thats what you get lavi