its soo good u should write more!

Awesome!

FUNNY! I LOVE IT! very acward at some parts but just hilarious. love holly

i loved it.
and to tell you the truth, i never liked will or heather. I wish that Lauren Brooke dident invent them.
Please, just one more chapter. i have nothing better to do. Im stuck in bed, i have the flu and need something to read.

cute story so far! i think you could improve with more plot line and detail! I will keep reading

Hey, nice story. *eagerly awaits update*

~SWS

Aw! Great story! Really pointless, but let's face it, what does have a point? It was cute and it made me smile! I luved the comment about Heather and Will at the end! LOL! :) Tamy forever!

Cute story.

Loved it! so sweet!
Same here about Heather and Will...

Loved it! So cute! I love Holly!

LOL! That was great! I was so excited to see that you'd written another oneshot.

Very nice! I think you should make more about what happens along the way.