 Mrs. Adam "Cakeeater" Banks 2008-03-22 . chapter 1 So, I have a couple of things to say: Number one, I'm going to agree and say, I thought Wu was a Chinese name.
Number two, Kenny IS an underused character.
Number three, as a writer, do you think Kenny is the most likely to be more angsty and less attached to the group? Because that's what it seems like as far as your story goes. A common theme all of the Kenny-centric fics have, one you've employed here (but strangely enough not in your Mary Sues fic), is that Kenny is a loner and an emo kid with a sob story. If you had wanted to stand out, you should have taken care to paint him in a different light.
As always, though, very nicely woven story, just a little generic. |
 whennerdscollide 2008-03-19 . chapter 1Ah, the troubles of being the only Asian kid in school. I can relate.
Except, there are like 12 other Asians, but I'm the only 100% Chinese, mistaken for a Vietnamese...yeah. @_@
I thought Kenny was Chinese though. Wu IS a Chinese name, but maybe it's a Korean name too...? |
 Torithy 2008-03-19 . chapter 1Really good job on this - short and sweet, but you packed so much into it! I like that we got a bit of back-story on Ken, how he ended up with the Ducks as well as how hard he'd found things before. And the friendship with Portman fit so well with the "third Bash Bro" idea - I like that you explained why they'd be close. Loved it! :D |