Very fun and full of awesomeness. The turtle especially.

I'm just reviewing to say that I love this story! Your characterisation of Dief was awesome!
It made me laugh out loud several times earning me some funny looks from ma family but it was worth it :)
Ray and Fraser were well written and the story read easy, so well done!
Thank you for writing and sharing this little gem.
BTW, loving the turtle ;)

I love this story. Dief is wonderful and his interaction with Fraser brilliant. Well done and thankyou for such an entertaining read.

Walking pebble made me cry. That was just so wonderful. Lettuce indeed!

Love this! You have the dog's perceptions perfectly formed and real sounding, and the interactions between the 'pack-mates' are fantastic. And the turtle... 'lettuce' -- just so perfect and incredibly funny! Thank you!

Cher

Fabulous! And I love the descriptors Dief uses for everyone - spikyray vs shinyray (LOL) etc.

So many great moment - thank you so much for posting this.

I love it! In fact I just love all your Due south stories! They're so funny! And cute too.

You're a great writter truly.

The stories in Diefenbaker's point of view is great!

Please more!

*bloody brilliant* You've captured the Deif beautifully with his "conversations" with Fraser, well done all around! :-)

That was AMAZING! Thanks SO much for sharing this, I LOVE this in Dief's perspective! And that Ray is Spiky-Ray. XD! How he communicates with the humans is great. With Fraiser it's cute, with Turnbul it's hilarious and Ray grows stronger and stronger.

All the moments when he's trying to convince Ben to 'lick Spiky-Ray's lips' and 'be in a pack of two' with him are brilliant! As are the parts with Ray half understanding and Dief. ;)

Great fanfiction!

It´s excellent, I love it! Very funny and kind of sweet.