nice

Perfect Story! Perfect

I don't know how long this has been out but i loved it. i really liked how you added Naruto at the very end. It made me laugh. And i also love the fact that you kept everything pretty close to the Manga. You're a great writed. Keep on going :)

It's three in the morning, I'm slightly tired, I can't really see my keyboard, so be prepared for some serious praise and stuff that is practically random riddled with typos.

You are an amazing writer. Your style is so easy to read and flows so well, the only problems a reader comes into are the typos, which are easily missed by an author while overviewing. Other than that, the rest of your grammar was perfect and your writing style just so flowy! (I don't think that is a word.) Definitely one of the more talented writers on .

As for the story, I can't believe it. I read all but the first chapter tonight, I think it took me about three hours. You sucked me in from the first chapter and I really couldn't stop reading, not for one second. The way you placed the characters into the plot, ever so perfectly, and created something so original and unique, it is a work of art.

It had to be hard to write these characters? Right? I would have found it hard, since we don't know a whole ton about the Naruto characters during Kakashi's time in the first place, and you did an amazing job. Everybody's character just seemed to fit ever so perfectly.

PLOT! I love talking about plot. Yours, AWESOMENESS! The way you progressed it, muwah! Although, there were some parts that could have been changed, like when Kakashi thought he was going crazy for thinking Anko was cute in the earlier chapters, that was just a little corny. But you only had a few of those, and they didn't affect the story too much, so it was still a perfectly readable story. Everything else, pure brilliance. Between the way Anko and Kakashi fall in love, from the way you do your plot, both fluffy and angst, I think I cried at one point, I can't remember. Anko's amnesia, that was a great idea, and then the WAY she regained her memory, you pulled that one off oh so well. I especially liked the ending, it had just the right amount of fluff, but it wasn't TOO much fluff, and it wasn't corny fluff, it was sweet fluff that gives you the tinglies when you read it. That doesn't happen very often to me, and I GOT TINGLIES!

So yeah, I really enjoyed it. There were some things that didn't sit right with me, but mainly it was just some of the thought process, cause it seemed a little unrealistic, but that is just me. You get to be added to my list of now 64 favorites, congratulations! It takes a lot to make it there!

Ok, I know I am forgetting to mention something, I know I am, but what is it...I can't remember, comes with the insomnia I guess.

If you don't mind me asking, was Rin dead? I hate not knowing things, and this one will just end up killing me. It makes sense taht she would be dead, or else she would have come back, since Orochimaru had something to do with her disappearance, correct?

Oh, and Anko's history, now that was creative! Everything about Anko's story line, pure genius, I tell you, genius. So original, it takes one heck of a mind to pull that one off.

You will probably hear from me again, since I am off to check out the rest of your profile. You mentioned a Twilight story featuring Alice and Jasper, and that has interested me. If I had seen/read Bleach, I would check those out, but maybe after I watch/read that one, it's on my list of anime/manga.

I bid you ado, now, cause I have officially run out of things to say. I still feel like I could continue to give you praise for the next six-thousand-five-hundred characters, but I would end up in repitition.

Ooh, that reminds me. A couple times you were a little repetitive with your phrasing, like you had used the same phrase like only paragraphs ago, just watch out for that! Repetitive phrases really make the writing of a story boring.

Also, your grammar skills, AMAZING! You had a few minor errors, but I only noticed them because I am weird that way. I was never one for grammar in school, but when it comes to writing, I spot the smallest things. So weird! So yeah, other than the few, mainly in the ... sections. It is just the three dots, ... no period at the end of them. ... And one other thing I noticed, but I can't remember what it was now.

YOU EXCELLED AT ALL FOUR PARTS OF A STORY! CHARACTERS! PLOT! WRITING! AND GRAMMAR! PERFECTION! BRILLIANCE! AMAZEMENT! AWESOMENESS! TOTAL FAVEDOM! FAVORITE STORY! FAVORITE AUTHOR! BOOYAH!

Don't worry Kakashi, hopefully she'll wake up... soon? I'm off to read the rest..

Aw why did Minato had to die? T-T I still love a thing Kakashi said about him some chapters back: Why'd Minato have to be so damn smart? lol that was an amazing story! I loved it!! Still, Minato didn't have to die!

Great chapter. I'm so glad that it ended nicely. It was a great fic. Bye.

I loved it... can you tell us whether Rin is alive?

Loved this chapter.

Oh no... sigh. Bring Obito back.

Hee hee hee... can't wait for the next chapter.

Hm... the usual -good chapter.

Liked it so far -Anko seems a little OOC though.

Hm... good writing.

Good chapter/