Nicely done - I'm a big Fraser/RayK fan. There wre a couple minor typos, but nothing too jarring.

You have a good feel for RayK's voice. I especially liked: It that pastry devouring machine is deaf, then I'm a freaking duck.

And: Way before I turn into a Raysicle, I'm going to Canadian myself to death.

Thank you kindly for posting!